just the description gave me a stroke so that kinda explains how reading it goes. I hope it'll improve and get popular this cause its a got story premise.
Leaving some reviews here.
Though, I don't know what to say xD
This novel reminds me of Overgeared, a player who returned to level 1 after some incident
Quite an interesting concept, definitely new to all the systems, cultivations, and other type of novels in this platform.
Let's see how this will work out.
the story is boring, the conflict in the story is too boring, the story is only about mc who collects girls to be strong, the relationship between mc and girls is also not interesting
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ok i gave it 5 stars on all just dont drop it author san.plsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspslspslssplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplsplspls pls.dont.drop.it
The only problem I had with this novel is that Wimp personality of MC is annoying, even if you are going for character development it's too much.Just make the evil one permanent.
The synopsis surely hooked me up. As for the first chapter, it's one of the best ever. It's very good. I like this story too. It's definitely amazing and wonderful. ??????
The author did really do a great job at making this novel! It was so freaking good and I really love the plotting and I could imagine all the scenes happening inside my mind, Keep on updating dear author.?
Interesting story development although the first few chapters of the story seemed to be a little scattered and all over the place, the author kicked things up in an interesting way. Vol- 2 writing quality improved. Vol-3 we get some back storiesVolume 4 is the best of all the arcs so far.Volume- 5 I never saw that plot twist coming
not worth the read. The grammar and spelling is horrible and, shows no sign of changing or editing. It is this low level of quality that makes me avoid most new works that look great in the narrative but is destroyed by unprofessionalism.
The background was not bad but is very hard to comprehend some times. it might get better, but it simply couldn't overcome the lack of care exhibited in the writing.
Hopefully, this story will be revised in the future.
The world, story and characters are great and quiet original for wuxia novel. Many culture are present among African, Chinese, Japanese and westerner.
But the writing is really bad. Repititions and typing errors are common among other annoying things and sometimes the writing feels of, the characters know things they shouldn't or you feel you missed something that wasn't told.
Honestly, I can't recommend this novel due to the writing that gets on my never. But if you are lenient on it, it's an excellent story with good characters.