PLEASE MAKE MORE I NEED THIS TO SATISFY MY HUNGER FOR A GOOD AND INTERESTING BOOK THAT HAS A GOOD STORY AND I FOUND MY HOPE IN THIS BOOK FOR THIS MIGHT THE ONLY THING THAT CAN SAVE ME
overall...it's a good book, would recommend
Okay, let's leave the cringe worthy synopsis and focus on the world build based on the synopsis.
How in the freaking world can they keep the MC and his family in the dark? human were social animals, he and his family would have friends, and they will then be notified, its a world wide program after all, there will be news on newspaper and net, or even word of mouth while they are prepping, its impossible for the MC and his family to never learn about it.
Seriously. Oh well, I will read it first and edit this if they explained how, so if you didn't see the 'edit' notes, then it means, they didn't bother explaining.
Just finished this novel a few.minutes ago and decided to share my views here.
It's a pretty good novel. Maybe because it's just around 500 chapters? Maybe it's because author doesn't falls into Hollywood Harem trap? It's hard to say.
One thing which makes this novel stand above almost all the Hollywood genre novels which I have ( which are quite a lot.) Is author doesn't follows the trend.
In other novels MC will always direct only those top rated movies. Or movies which have become box office hit. Here author doesn't cares for those. He chooses those little heard of movies which could have been better and improves on them. With his cheat, he tries to avoid the pit falls of the original movie.
If you see the movie list you will that most of the movies are those which these CN novels will not even touch. These include Juno, When Happiness Comes Knocking District 9, Firefly, 21, I am Legend, 500 days with Summer and more.
Most of the movies were rated around 7 on IMDB but here author doesn't steps back. He talks about his own views on what could have made it better. Of course this being the MC, those views will definitely win the box office and not face the real market.
But with just this, the story stands apart from most of them.
Next is his love life. All the Hollywood genre CN novels have the MC have a harem or relationship with multiple women. Here fortunately he just sticks to Jessica and doesn't betrays her trust.
Another thing which caught my attention was his race. Most of these books will have MC take over some American Guy, or have mixed heritage. But here he is purely Chinese. But despite that he doesn't goes and preaches Chinese nationalism. A point for that.
And the best thing? You don't have unnecessary chapters full of politics and relations. Yes they make the story feel real. But we really don't care. If someone is reading this type of story, he doesn't cares for the politics which is going on between everyone. He or she only wants to read about movies, it's box office and people's reaction. And an award ceremony or two to spice everything up.
Few things which made me disappointed are the reactions and the ending. The reactions in the story are unnecessarily stretched. They cover numerous chapters and include not only audience and critics review but also the box office income every few paras. Yes, we understand that it was a super hit. But apart from the first week and the global income, no one cares about your daily and weekly box office. Nor do we care for the long list of box office earned by competitors.
Same with the award ceremonies. It's too much! We do g care for the critic awards , the MtV awards, the guild awards and the association awards. People only know about Oscars, Golden Globe, Emmie's, Cannes, Saturn and probably Hugo.
Talking about the ending. It's was okay. But not giving reactions for movies which you hyped for past few chapters was a big let down. Whether it was Nolan's Dark Knight or the MCs planned Black Swan, Firefly 2 and Infinity.
Anyway a good story. It's short and probably better than most novels here.
READ IT GUYS! Read it to know the worth of the story, a very interesting and exciting System trope novel. The gaming Characters and Story plot is just great. It takes a lot of chapters for me to be hooked with the story, but this book completely made me hooked by just the first chapter.
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Hola, Its the Author.
I genuinely didnt know I could write a review for my own book...
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Anyway enjoy my shameless review.
Downfall Of The Kings is a fantastic book. It plays with a lot of ideas and topics that have already been established within the fantasy community. While the book is certainly inspired by many of these, I can assure you, its defenitly unique in its own right.
Prepare for a lot of twists, turns and snarky stupidity. Honestly would You expect anything less? The main character is modeled after me you know.
The writing at the beginning is very rough so bear with me please. I think the quality seems to be getting better... I dont really know but its a lot easier to write now.
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Anyway Im sure I have bored you by now with this Review. Go out There and read my book!!!!!!!!
Please...
Sorry for the exclamation points, I didn’t mean to yell at you, I was just excited.
Thank you for all your continued support!!!!
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People are going to say my taste for webnovel are bad... But idc I enjoy these type of novels but not just these. Maybe there are repetitive lines or plots or cliques but they are satisfying and anyone can enjoy just passing some time reading this.
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Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel.
**SPOILERS BE WARNED**
The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them.
Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough.
Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character.
The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel.
Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.
VERY emotional, VERY confrontational, VERY insecure author who will repeatedly tell you to go read something else whenever you point out something you don't like in the comments.
Very well then, i will go read other, better stories with more stable authors.
At the very least i will not review bomb this story, as there were moments i genuinely enjoyed (such as the first time phoenix was summoned) but i came to dislike the flow of events. Truthfully my interactions with the author were just icing on the cake.
The story is really amazing!! It's a very fresh and exciting concept, with a really fun protagonist, interesting characters and cool abilities!!
The world and general story settings are very fun and the potential future of the MC is really super exciting!!!!!!!
I'm really looking forward to the story's development, and I recommend it very much! I enjoy reading it a lot!
I think the author's amazing, I hope you'll continue writing it until the end!!!!
If you're hesitating you should try to at least read a bit, you'll probably get hooked to it in a few chapters!!