I absolutely love this story. I wish this would be updated though, I would love read volume 3!
the characters i always will love, especially asuna and kirito
I like the warcraft concept. And especially when you go to kingdom building route with an undead and especially the harem . Btw harem is a plus + for me . You can just update 1 to 2 chap a day just take it easy .
*He is not the only one that is from the future*
i know that this one thing kills any novel for people so that way you know before you start reading.
*Some Spoilers ahead*
The MC is transmigrated in to the body of a 9year old boy from the past, not his own body. His situation is not so good because his moms a piece of sh*t and his dad is also a piece of sh*t. I don't know why but he starts to try and help his mother out of the situation even though he hates her for what she has done to him. I would understand if she was a good mother to him but she was not.
He makes allot of decisions that makes no sense, he's not a kid. His body is, but his mind is not. So you would think he would make clearer decisions, but he does not.
The whole, hes not the only person from the future is something that I don't like, I was okay with there being one other person from the future that he knows. And i was excited to see what both of them will do to change the future for the better. But then you decided to add a f*cking Organization that stops people that are from the future, from changing the timeline.
At that point I knew that it was not what I expected from reading the synopsis. As well as knowing that this novel will be filled with people from the future with allot of forced drama.
If you like transmigration story's about a male MC and a female MC making quick and rash decisions, while it blows up in there face later. Then them not being able to do what they wanted to do, like change the future for the better. Because theirs a secret organization that wont allow them to, because if they do, they will kill them. Then more then likely weird forced dramatic situations while throwing in more people from the future to stir up more drama.
Then this novel is for you.
Its not something i like but you may.
bruh the guy is sooo dum i know he keeps prisoners but bruh the way he handles thing is not to my taste idk some people might like it. but its fustrating for me when you capture a rapist or a cannibalism and still locked them in instead of killing them j mean i could let some past but he locks most of them
Despite the fact that I like the story there are many glaring issues. The cultivation system doesn’t make sense. You can either be a martial artist, a mage, or both. In order to increase your rank you must open up meridians which there are nine of. However if you practice both then you need to share so the ratio becomes 5/4 which means you are weaker than a pure mage and martial artist when instead you should be stronger so the concept doesn’t make sense. Instead it should be different concepts such as using dark energy to increase bodily functions, and strength for martial artists and for mages they could convert that energy into mana which is stored somewhere in the body. The author also creates these “spaces” that are very confusing and quite frankly shouldn’t exist.
I read until around Chapter 114, were I now will completely abandon this story.All the side characters don't have real character or proper developement besides, well the one goal they trade their life for, after practically killing their enemies they remain by our Protagonists side, listening to all his orders and just are there to overpower everyone else on his path.I couldn't read it anymore after that one subordinate, who signed his life away for 14 years of being the Protagonists slave, fused with the FEMALE Angel Soul and complained in losing his manliness by fusing with her and actually refused to take her power, but still got it, even if it's 'slowly', it just pisses me totally off. It's her power he is taking after all, her powers are made for a female by a female, what did he expect?He constantly complained how he was the weakest among the subordinates and wanted to become stronger, but instead of giving him like an typical power training or trade that could make him stronger, he fused with the female Angel, that made no sense to me as he wasn't suitable to any of the Angels in the beginning and I don't like it how the Autor ignores his own reasoning, as he previously mentioned how no the former Owners didn't found any suitable bodies for these Angels, but now they do, which I don't mind, but at least the Autor could have just made any other character to fuse with the female Angel instead of that man.It was a okay read till that scene, I just don't like how it developed and it made me sour towards the story, I'm sorry to all that love this trash, but this is my opinion.
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A potentially good storyline with awesome character design????????????????????????I gave it five star to encourage author but still it's got a way to become a genuinely five star rating novel ?Keep up the good work author ???????????????????
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still here sis and lil bro. will there be updates soon? what happening with the other story you was talking about??????????????????
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