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Please Keep up the good work. I really loved it.please update. I was really getting into the story. So please update soon. Plus whatever happened to the two women in the cave.
Nice story, can’t wait for more chapters.I really enjoyed reading from chapter one! One of the best thing so far, no filler, mc not a idiot, not too over powering but I think he will become overpowered!
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I read it In a app called fizzo. It has contain of over 1000+ chapters. Recently the app is updated and change the language from English into different language and the story is under revision. It's a pity that the author is stop posting any chapters or maybe he can't post anymore because of the new feature of the app. This story was the most exciting novel I ever read. Maybe in the first face of the story it's kinda boring and you may find it look like the other novel story but it is not. I'm read it over 1000+ chapter and it will bring you into different world
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Too perfect compared to the load of garrbadge that get picked so I will overrated to the maximum..............................................................
Oi Author, i must say that this work of yours is DIGUSTINGLY COMFORTABLE TO READ!So fvcking comfortable, but maybe you can slow down a bit, although the mc is noob but he's digustingly expert in skills but you didn't explain about game system much.But it's that makes the story is friendly.So KEEP UPDATING OR I WILL BAN YOUR ACCOUNT
If you want a ruthless and murderous MC, this book is for you. I was quite interested by the name Vishnu because I knew that was the name of the Hindu God. I wonder if that had relevance to the story later on. The writing quality have some grammar mistakes, but the word usage itself is alright. Only some problems with punctuations and some sentences could have been divided into two or three. As for the character development, I'm looking forward to how Vishnu will change after he encounters more hardships. He loves to torture people but it was out of justice, though how he enact that justice may seem to be too much for some. It gives him andinteresting moral compass.Overall, go try to read the book if you like crazy MC like this!
If you wanna take my advice, this is the first of 2 books that are barely readable and pass my check for books.D
This piece is good. He has the potential to be good. I hope the author does not spoil the novel and does not add Chinese clichés. Quite interesting to read.
If u want to know what true racism is and how to write a book on racism read this Chinese novel. Except China whole world people are piece of **** as they inherently corrupt, bad, illogical, idiotic and everything that author can imagine. Concept of mythological gene is the only thing that make people read it if not then author should pray that he visit no other country except China as his disgusting thoughts is not acceptable anywhere.
