"Drinks, coffee or tea?"
Shinta was startled he began looking around his surrounding's. Noticing he was in a very dark space yet the Hutt was still behind him. "what happened!?" he yelled.
Sigh came out from Anna. His power become more strong day by day. This was worrisome because can't predict what will be happen if he can't control his power. Suddenly a presence came out from behind, gives back hug. "Why my Queen frowning herself in here?"
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would it ultimately comes down to is it the male lead consistently sexually assaults a female lead until she finally gives in and realize that she has feelings for him which is wrong chapter 450 I think? The male lead as of this point since I've just decided to stop reading has yet to respect her as a person, still occasionally refers to her as pray, or it, consistently threatens to change her into a cage and actually did change her to a bed inside of a cage during their wedding night. many times he sexually forces himself on her while she is passed out or sleeping. he claims ownership of her and the author actually encourages that by writing the female lead who is supposed to be the strong amazing mercenary genius into a gradually submitting to him instead of you know not getting herself into these situations. I wasted way too many coins. Way too many coins for a book that's basically about consistent sexual assault and manipulation until the female lead acquiesces. And sometimes occasionally the author blesses you with a little bit of plot
the story is average and I find it quite good compared to the books I usually read.
You are quite detailed, which gives me a pretty solid idea of what’s happening and how everything is supposed to look. I was able to picture the scenes quite clearly ? keep writing! ❤️
She took the route that led to her department. As she entered the office, the decoration was totally different from what she remembered. She tried to remember if her memories had gotten wrong but the difference was easily spotted.
Good story bro keep it up and don't drop this story ? Waiting for new chapter ??
first impressions after reading the first 50 chapters. So far an interesting story about a man who 'accidentally' found a cultivation technique that allows him to live for a very long time. After a long time of cultivation and pushing earth technology to an higher from the shadows he is discovered by some powerful creatures who guide him to leave earth and go to a dimension where humans cultivate. He is 'guided' to join a sect and start his cultivation journey.I like that the story is told in a different way than the cultivation stories from Chinese writers (different pacing, different starting point and route towards the furst cultivation steps, etc) while still being a cultivation story. It gives the story a fresh feeling (starting as sci-fi and changing into cultivation in a way not seen very often). What I also like is that although the mc is starting out with the mc receiving all kinds of 'plot armor' and lucky encounters it is told in such a way that it is not just luck that will make the mc strong, he earns it with smart choices. And on this platform one of the best things I could say is that so far I haven't seen an 'idiotic young master' type of character (I hate those characters bc they often get themselves and their family killed for the dumbest of reasons. They are called cannon fodder for a reason but more often than not it doesn't do the image of the mc in the eyes of the reader much good. An antagonist who acts out of logical reasoning make the main character look better when he defeats them)Not everything is great but so far I have only found minor things and not things like where the story and character development breaks world building. Think of things like sound in space, small mistakes that are also often made in movies and animation. And another thing that sometimes can be better is the distinction between narrator and character. When is the narrator talking about the mc, when is the narrator talking in general. In other words small things that could often be fixed with a slight restructuring of some sentences or paragraphs.The story is interesting, plays out in an interesting world and told in an entertaining way. I hope it can hold this energy in later chapters too.
its good??........................??♥️?????