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For updates stability Heavens Clan gets a five
I am not a fan of the inuzuka clan but this one is awesome!!! Worth the read and I highly recommend this to everyone! Keep up the good work.
Awesome action scenes, great dialogue. Absolutely hilarious story.
I loved reading this, it is fast paced, and action packed. I enjoyed the author's use of humor, and was surprised by how detailed the scenes were.
I full heartedly reccomend reading this if you like fantasy/action or dark humor.
(For some reason my phone wanted to change humor to humour everytime I tried to type it up...
Amazing novel every thing in this book was excellent but we want more chapter ber day because it is so hard to wait several hours to read chapters
amazing so far I love the diety type mc who just limits himself but can be what he wants. alot of fun to read. could use a editor for sure but fantastic so far.
The flow of the story is smooth so far. The author has put lots of effort into the story while trying to make the concept clear. I liked the synopsis- It is very clear and describe the story in short! Just a few errors which could be corrected during editing! so far, well-done author!
Happy writing!
You should put a meme and parodies tags here!!!!??? Anyway.. The idea is pretty good, but, this chapter seems rushed. There are also things that can be fix about the way you narrates this story. I recommend to use third person Point of View when you write more chapters. Well, I can't say much because you only have one chapter for now. I will review again when you have more chapters!! Don't give up!! ᕙ(@°▽°@)ᕗ
Fallout 4 : I must save my daughter and take revenge for my wife/husband ... 5 min later oh a scraps, and an other one and here too.Genius daddy : I must save my daughter and my wife .... 2 min later ohhh a face to slap, and an other one, I really need to slap this face
I can't find much to criticize in this novel. The beginning is a little cliche, but after that it's interesting. I would say it's similar to Monster Pet Evolution with some elements of Building the Utlimate Fantasy (Specifically the part where random important people are summoned and are given opportunities to improve their strength). I would say it's a decent novel considering all the other alternatives released this week
Hi again, it's the tenth review so I thought to write it myself then :DFor those who are new to the novel, this is a pure game based one for game nerds like me. Most of events are focused on the game and inside game competitions and struggles, challenges and difficulties, ups and downs of the MC while he builds a huge guild, intelligence organization, and finally a bandit group that will reign terror in the game.The first chapter is about most of preparations I had already made for the novel. You can check it but don't feel lost there, as all these info will appear gradually in the game, within its appropriate context and time.Finally I hope this novel satisfies all of game addicts like me, and your support is appreciated.
I really like this kind of genre, its so thrilling and amazing! The plots and development. The author did a good job here and the style of writing is good too, easy to understand. Good work author! Keep it up
