flirting with fate? that really got me curious can't wait
love the story author keep going._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very good start and descritions, keep going o/
The story has a great starting. In webnovel we have many stories about mc in vr world or playing vr like a hero. But we have a little about those who make vr possible. Where you can have different test with beautiful family Bond. Best of luck with your journey.
the story had so much potential in the beginning but it quickly became shit ?it looks like after some chapters the author became brain dead and run out of ideas first of all the characters are extremely one dimensional, they only live to be either tortured or killed by mcsecond of all the story development is shit!, the author just throws some random bullshit with no explanation at alllook at the mc he is so overpowered for no reason at all!Bro like wtf??!, the guy has system, why?, we don't knowthe guy is somehow related to the so called king of kings, why?, we don't knowthe guy met king darius and for some reasons he can Inherit his powers, why?, WE STILL DONT FUCKING KNOW??!the author is trying so hard to make the mc look amazing and strong but man let me tell u ur failing terriblysigh...I can probably write a fucking whole essay showing just how much plot holes this novel has but let me stop here
MC is a loser who instantly agrees to help the used succubus like a slave.
this story really amaze me..because it shows that a person can be successful if he choose to..??????????????❤???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Mystrous and Interesting ?, waiting the upcoming chapters, I liked the way that you described the feelings and the dialogue between the characters was interesting, greetings to the author ?
Hi guys! Here is the author giving a shameless review... a cliché introduction, why not?Ok, I'm going to give a little introduction to the novel. Like the tags says, this is going to be a Harem novel. But not like the ones that the girls follow the boy without any sense. They all have their personality, probably some of them could be cliché, but what type of character isn't a cliche nowadays?There are going to be girls that don't fall out for the mc and fall for other men characters. There are going to be boys who are friends of the Mc that are going to have importance in the novel.The novel has an Mc, but it will also follow the progress of other characters. There aren't incomprehensible power-ups...I'm not going to write any filler chapters; I don't like them. If I write, it's is going to be with a reason like the development of feelings between characters, some random information that I need to introduce, etc...Just take a look! I hope you enjoy my novel! I'm open to suggestions in the reviews!
I personally enjoy the plot development and the characters (the second FL needs more screentime, please)...and what suprised me was the factual details the author included, for example, bullets calibre, military base facilities, science behind a abilities, etc...Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️
Excellent fight scenes. The fight is actually what brought me in, even though there are a slight bit of writing errors, the author made sure to keep us hooked up with his story. The background of the story is simple and best.But the only thing I would say is that from the next time, make sure you give a slow start to your novel. All the best author.
The story begins with our main character betting on having potential to be a sorcerer, and having the bet pay off. Some world building ensues, but as of CH15 the power levels and power progression systems are still a bit fuzzy. The characters are interesting but fairly one dimensional, although in fairness there hasn't been much chance to develop them yet. The story recently took a twist which seems to embark into a much more ruthless path than what was originally set. I'll update this review as necessary.So far I set updating stability at 5/5, since it's fairly early and I think giving people the benefit of the doubt is necessary. I'll also update that as we keep getting releases.