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It's really good, definitely recommend.
The story about demon girl who's actually has a real "sense" about her own kind, descending into a mortal realm just to find normality of daily life her own kind cannot afford. I see a lot of potential in this story, especially that naive demon girl.
Overall, the narration is very vivid yet complex, easy yet interesting to understand if you have very good imagination since there are many implied messages and foreshadowing future which is very nice, especially in monologues, and environment descriptions.
In conclusion
Ten out of ten
How in the literal heck did this not get pick and trash old ancestor one did?The ancestor was full on face slapping one shots.What is web novel doingggggg
Well at the very least the idea for the novel is rather new and is one of the more unexplored sides of Webnovel, let's see how the author handles the execution of the plot.
Cool i like the way you made the MC talentless in magic. In some reincarnation stories the Mc is always talented it kinda becomes boring for me. Keep up the good work
This novel is very poetic. The wording is so smooth and intricate, this writer clearly takes great pride in her use of literary devices. Tremendous work author, I'm looking forward to more updates ?
Anyone know the RAW name? im enjoying this a lot and i hope this gets picked
really fast paced beginning, crazy power ups, it seemed interesting......but the MC's shallowness kinda threw me off. And the nonsensical powers are also a let down. No matter how unscientific, if you set it up right it would be acceptable, but the author here does a very poor job of it.
I'm like
Raw 盗墓小说成真,我被误认为盗墓贼!
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Only got a few chapters in so the high ratings on updating stability and world background are just me giving author the benefit of the doubt. Concept itself, while not necessarily original, is good. But 1) the grammar and writing style (author "mysteriously" leaving out stuff in an to me really annoying way, like there is no motivation for stuff more then whether it is convenient for author or not) are horrible. And 2) characters feel really flat, no realistic emotions from mc. I would give it another try if it was editet to flow better though.
its a nice read. I recommend...
.............its a nice read. I recommend...
.............its a nice read. I recommend...
.............its a nice read. I recommend...
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read out of curiosity, but kinda really bad advice. it's true that this type of writing can capture the attention of readers, but it's usually not the type of attention one would want. The suggestions on what to do with the MC would make MC far to Mary/Gary Sue, which isn't very pleasant to read. It also holes up and coming writers into holes and bad habits, not allowing them to explore while they're still growing.
Just don't recommend following the advice listed, that's all.
