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It's a well written novel. The story isn't fast, but it flows quite well. Characterization of the various personages is good, and the background is setup quite interestingly.
There is some intrigue and as usual 60 chapters is just not enough. I highly recommend this novel. There are no arrogant young masters, but there is an interesting setup, good MC, personable secondary characters and well written plot (so far).
I was a bit cringe at the beginning seeing that It's the same introduction to the other Isekai Manga/Novel I read, specially with OP Ability that was received from a God/Goddess/Entity, but the plot changed my view of the story, sure he is a bit arrogant and clumsy like the other Isekai Mc I know but how he adapts and how he follows what he aspires to be is what made him different from the rest. keep up the good work and keep writing dude, this is a really great book.
The Cultivating SIMP : My master is better than twitch thots, and actually lets me **** her - the novel,
Welp, 5 star cause why the fk not. not like any male lead romance novel ever gets picked
I love the author's writing style and the detailed descriptions in the story. It is an interesting novel and it's plot is mind blowing looking forward to it's end.
No one is talking. Haha.. I'm bored.
A very interesting story with a nice fresh change up for an apocalypse tale. The current world building is going on nicely with a promise for more as the tale unwinds.
The updates appears to be stable.
I really enjoy the personality of the main character. And nothing about him seems forced currently. You just have the proper amount of background knowledge to understand the reason he is the way he is. And can simply immerse yourself in the story without having to ask too much of how and why.
Very few grammar and spelling mistakes.
And the story is moving at a nice pace. Not too fast and not to slow. Though the mc is slightly op with the potential for more of an significant for more power it isn't completely world breaking like most make the mistake of doing. As well as the fact that no stupid nerfs seem to be in route.
Overall like I said interesting story that is worth the read if you enjoy apocalypse settings with magic included as they all should be...
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This is what I would call a great concept that was poorly executed. The idea of the story is great, the summary accurately portrays the idea thus drawing you in. But once reading it the interest quickly dies out. The Grammer is bad, no other way to put it. The character development is shallow next to non existent. Its rushed, no real connection formed between the reader and MC. Its more of a story u read to fulfill ur power trip fantasies. Reading it expecting anything else will disappoint u.
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