Great story but author need to edit and improve grammer. Need more chapters
need more chapters
need more chapters
need more chapters
need more chapters
this another trash with the mc hiding his cultivation level for no reason and letting his enemy assasinate him again without retailating, someone try to poison him anf he just let it be
This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!
Even though it is the start. I can see potential in the book. I hope to see more of it in the future. The writing is not the best but it is of good quality. I can follow up without getting lost. I love it.
Hoo God i don't even have word's to describe this book my author never fail to amaze me with her workbut u guys should go and read it I promise you also won't have word's like me u will be speechless and breathless I trust my author this is just a tip on the iceberg just can't wait??????????
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
it's good idea and devolvement but grammar needs a lot of work
Update chapter 341.Guess that's it for me, huh. The latest chapters kind of got out of hand, plenty of plotholes. The pace is all over the place. Why would they fight for hundreds of years then go all-out and do so much in just 2 months. The power ups are also too quick with no rhyme or reason, jumping a whole rank because author hasn't prepared corresponding arc and there was a gap. Also don't like how MC behaves lately, he was doing better in early chapters, it seems so rushed up now and he's just going all solo guerilla. Corpse tide of Zenjue took several years of buildup to settle which was fine, but how about now?The novel felt like a mix of Demon's Diary, Protect Our Patriarch and some other. On one hand they're on islands, away from mainland, and warring another second-rate sect. On the other hand their little realm is merging with some demon world and there are space tunnels. A quite interesting mix to be honest, but the execution seems rather poor to me after the first 200,300 chapters: from management, planning, convos and buildups it became more of a fighting cultivation novel where MC constantly goes and fights powerhouses. This is boring.
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This is one of my favorite monster mc novels! The mc is a true monster with monster instincts etc. I also love the system and it’s features, very creative.As you read, you can legit feel the mc growing smarter and smarter each chapter. I like the fact that the author added the detail of the mc gaining his very own consciousness and individual thoughts, it made things seem a lot more realistic.Additionally, the quality of writting is really good. The author write very nice, and it’s quality never drops, from chapter 1 all the way to the latest chapter - it has never dropped, and even when the author does misspell a word due to autocorrect, he makes sure to immediately edit and fix it. This story is a perfect example of a hidden gem!
One of my favourite novels, keep up the good work