The dao of two timing were integrated Deeply in hansheng bones.That's all i had to say.
storyline is awesome overall this story is a great story ?????
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I really enjoy this story. It has amazing characters, beautiful word play and really cool story. Thank you J_Void for this masterpiece.
I fell in love with this novel at first sight it managed to Ignite the flame I have for football again after years of it being extinguished. But the author just ruined it with the pedophile relationship. The MC was going to adopt the the girl as his daughter who later on became his wife. While he had a perfectly good woman who was beautiful, his age, and cared for him. But nope the 13 yo girl became his wife... That alone ruined the novel for me
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
This book is super Good the author got everything down to the last detail and he doesn’t disappoint. He knows how to tell a story and how to keep people interested and wanting more. You should try it out
Hold up out of nowhere you think you can just set premium at like 48 chapters? Isn't mad snail also the dude who like hasn't finished a few novels/or hiatus? So you're telling me I need to pay within the first 50 chapters on a novel that may or may not be finished or take 5 years to translate? Yep bad ratings goodluck
Good ideas and great women
His idea of a harem is unique and truly jealous worth
I would recommend this book to all the perverts out there
Although the English need to be improved its still a work of art
This story is a "turn off your brain and enjoy it story". It's a classic: VRMMO story, the world is real interesting and you can have a lot of fun reading it, but there are such better stories to read of the same genre in this website. This story relies on random bullshit plot armor to progress on every single chapter. the protagonist personalist is a human equivalent of a bag of garbage. He is not evil and calculating cool mc, but instead he is just a giant asshole which everyone loves for no reason. The author is constantly buffing and nerfing the protagonist through random plot bullshit events that come out of nowhere. Too OP: here some random plot bullshit to nerf him, Too challenging:here is some random plot armor to help you. Even when there is an explanation for the plot armor, it usually just dumb and forced. He also likes to tell stupid lies, when telling the truth would often be more helpful and less troubling.
How should I say this, I enjoy the early chapters as it feel better in structure and goals despite a lot of plot holes.
There are a lot of grammar error especially the "you, you are, your" family, it did not bother me that much as I'm non native english speaker but I need to call the author about it so he can improve his writting.
The world background let say vague at best, there is not a lot being told or explain. There are some good and famous areas being told but not in great detail either.
The characters design are rather bland with a little bit of interesting twist, but they are all pretty much did not have good development.
The creatures so far are pretty much forgotten, like how the zombies can evolve but MC only evolve the dog -> wolf and that's it, nothing else. So the variety is extremely lacking.
The story was thrown down the drain, I feel like there are a lot of unexplain time skip like how the MC all of sudden control pretty much most of the world within few days. How there is no opposition at all and how the author only touch minor characters that will change nothing for the fate of the world.
Overall, I enjoy my time reading it but the flaws are obliviously as long as I use a little bit of brain power. Interesting idea, messy excecution.
Note : I don't know if I want to continue reading this or not as the longer it goes, the less excited I got.
Good wish fulfillment story and I love it, please release more I even read some mtl but it’s too confusing .. [img=recommend][img=recommend]