It started off good, but the section of the book where the mc is on earth just seems to be a copy of solo leveling.
it's fanfic but is placed in novel section with chapter 29 onwards locked and writing quality is horrible it's really cliche novel with Chinese vibes of face slapping overall trash
I just read up to 2 chapters. It is an interesting story plot of having two people to another world, but the way I see it is reading right now it's in a level where it needs to plan first. I'll keep reading it and will update it after I finish it all
5Star because why not.. is what i would like to say but its a promising novel in making and it has quite interesting concept. Writing quality will be improving as the author is just a newb
Awesomeness original novel by wonderful author. There was a time when I simply got tired of reading boring cultivation and game novels when I found this gem.
There is still some clichés common to all novels- poor background MC, system, but the author skillfully uses them to their full potential. One thing I liked is the lack of arrogant,silky pants young master. MC's sect is more or less united. There is no intra-disciple killing,intra-elders though there are rankings but it is much peaceful. In my opinion that's how a sect should be.
I hate arcs on sect civil wars and MC's first sect being the weakest sect in the weakest kingdom of the spiritually weakest region of the weakest continent ( the list goes on if you know what I mean
I like This chapter and i alredy Check it out you new nove i like it very much Reborn as truhy side carecter i fan of this kind of novels and also you guys can check this novel out you like it too
Review just based on first chapter:
Great descriptive writing, and not repetitive. Just the first chapter shows the amount of potential this novel has. As much as I hate long chapters, I’ve enjoyed it a lot. Great work!
this book is interesting and educates about a lot of obvious facts, please keep writing and no stopping. I love your story but please increase your words because it's kind of limited.
Garbage....Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm I have more characters than you author, so .....Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm 40 characters
i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go :
- as of right now updates seems ok
-decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel .
- nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm.
- Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree .
i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment
I'd say it's a nice story, but it could use some work. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but aside from that, the story is well put together, and I really appreciate the effort you put into it. Good luck and wising you the best??
I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.