LordJA0U
and I heard, this novel has a manhua, should I just read the manhua?
Is this giid
I like transmigration story like this but there might be some improvement for author. For example the first was knowledge consistency from each characters such as how the other non-transmigrate character know the doomsday event like monster siege, doomsday artifact items, etc. when MC was the only human that just transmigrate, where the knowledge these people come from?? Heck even with the transmigrate MC knowledge he doesn't even remember that the Undead City was in their city hospital. If he was truly transmigrate hero, he should collect all these "strategical history" that he knew from before his transmigrate life and made it his collection. Next was plot consistency such as the doomsday just have been so many days not even a week but there are some faction and ruins that have been establish from long before doomsday and already a mass to join their faction with so many people. There were also some historical ruins that already there from previous era?? What this even mean?? Overall even we reader love to be fooled fool by fantasy story but author doesn't need to insult our intelligence.
Man, I started reading this novel but I didn't see the h1arem tag. It's a good read but not my type of novel.
Read the first 15 chapters and let's just say it is very boring...
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i think that reading mtl will provide more translation consistency than this... seriously bad translation. every now and then you will get absolutely stupid sentences that make no sense...
Shit, I was still reading this on gravity tales when it was suddenly taken down. Even worse is that I was on chapter 435 but the chapters beyond 400 isn’t on the Webnovel app yet.
I wish can write systems novel like this. You did a great job in your wording and character's settings. I think I have to learn from you. Thumbs up for you.
the character building was magnificent and also love the cameo of so many other anime lines in the story
Too many grammatical errors and passages that did not have coherent words. Pronouns are used wrong but that is expected when the story is translated. So enough with the bad, I cant spoil the story so the MC is interesting. He seems to be living a double life. One life is good while the other is horrible. But he does not enjoy either one. He can't be really happy. But it is interesting to see that he is making the best of his situation. He may be overpowered but this power can not make his situation better until later on! Great start would rate higher, but I have my reservations.
I absolutely adore this story. it's very entertaining. The only issues that I've come across for myself is how slow the story is developing, and how slow its being updated. However, writing takes time which is something I will continue to respect as I wait for the next installment.
I love the story all chapters are very interesting.I.am.so engrossed and looking forward for new updates..I cant wait for the next chapter sad it ended...I wanted to know.more about LYY and HBW journey..
