Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
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the MC and this story give me pure rage.MC: oh so I made you lose months of regular pay and you want payment?Villagers: yesMC:*walks away*villagers:*chase him*MC: whY aRE U HiTtinG mE????idk know if the author is a genius or as drain dead. As I can not tell if he wrote the mc to have the brainpower for his age unlike every other author or the author has a weird sense of right and wrong.Also, the writing quality is pretty poor but author to you
to be honestly I will say it is good for the noob readers ...it will make old readers fill sick ...to sick ...MC use his power for what save people... randomly .lol that's to out of line ....and it's feels like it was writin by a child rather then adult.?
Had potential but turned trash. Instead of disabled little suster, it became lonely little girl that is his neighbor. Of course it just soldifies that most Chinese get hard when looking at little girls and they all have hero complexes. They are pathetic in real life and hence churn out their fantasies in these novles.
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started out very nice and interesting then there was some blatant slowing mc progression, moments that made me cringe when reading or dubious whether it is me or this book that has logic issues. overall interesting story with annoying bits and thickly written plot.
What in the world is this doing on the top novels. The way it's written is so awful, it just made me want to drop this faster and faster.
Like what is wrong with the way the character talk to each others?
"Finn Taylor this Finn Taylor that Yvette Larson this Yvette Larson that" like jesus christ innovate at some point. Couldn't even tell you how bad the plot is even if I tried.
It good, I like it..........................................................................................................................
Good job author, I do like your other novel yin yang harmony system, and this might also be a good read, only read 12 chapters so far m, so this might not be the best review, but.... imo their's a little too much connection in the novel, like bringing another novel woman to this, tbh I like ntr, only when it's the mc doing, and please don't take it the wrong way, I don't mean one mc of a novel cucking the other, Good job writing, that stuff takes lots of energy, expecting things to get better as I read, I might give another review after seeing how things turns out
Hope to see this go somewhere, the go back to the past for an mmorpg is being used in multiple places and some of them are also merging the magic into the real world, this is the one where the MC has it easy and everything is going well and fast for him even tho there are differences in timeline since the beginning