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this story is so amazing. im so glad we have people like mob_mobbers to write these masterpieces. i read this book every single day and its help me out so much i love you mob_mobbers please create more stories like this
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What ruins this story for me is that it puts itself in the setting of Perfect World, an already established novel. It's as if the author felt too lazy to make a world of their own.
What is especially disappointing is that the synopsis doesn't even mention a bit of this, but is intentionally misleading. The story doesn't even feel like it will abide by the original novels plot, more like the author just took the names of the characters from Perfect World and bastardized it.
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A very interesting story indeed, i hope the author continues this novel and the grammar is quite good but still need some improvement[img=recommend]
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a great read.
even the seemingly 'ordinary' and 'mundane' things are written so well that I just couldn't stop reading until it finished!
and it's not even fiction!
and the pics are too good, i can imagine how good of a place u visited.
it's just great.
author-san, i now know that i need a trip to beach and farms to get some relief from this stressful life.
That was a simple, subtle but very interesting piece of work. looking forward to reading more.
I loved the simple language use which still had the capacity to lure me in.
Writing Quality:
it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.
Story Development:
I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.
Character Design:
The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.
Updating Stability:
Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.
World Background:
For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
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