I like this fiction so far. It's solid. Character development is decent, story development is decent.I really think that this is a good foundation for continuing forward. Importantly, the main character stands out as vibrant and interesting.First, the narrative is ok. It follows a straight line of progress and in the first 10k written it did not deviate. Second, since it is a system-based world, expect the blue window and a lot of notification.I am looking forward to how the story pans out.