So slow and boring too many filler chapters you are ruining the story just to add more chapters sometimes it took 4 chapters and yet nothing happening
I love the story but when will you update, author?
The introduction of the mysterious system and the quest at the end created a lot of intrigue, I am very excited about what will happen next!
Question Author!I finished reading 3 of your novels (All of them are great and well written btw) and was wondering if you plan on creating a novel where the MC and ML flip flop like in Prince and hisFool, albeit briefly? So far it was only that book that you had the MC as the top and had Yi Chen open to being the bottom but Zi Han not following through in The Assassins Enemy Lover. I think it'll be interesting to say the least and spice up the story a bit, at least in my opinion but anyways if you see this let me know and keep up the great work!
Haven’t read it yet but sounds interesting.Question: Why does the main character look more like a woman than the female lead?
Great concept but the issue is MC. He’s an idiot and the story progresses in a horrible way. MC makes an oath with royal family not to harm them or his mana will be destroyed. Well next moment they give him a poison and he gets angry and kills a couple of their people destroying his mana.Now the story changes from him utilizing mana to a made up BS concept that makes no sense and is weaker. Oh right he can’t even level up normally no more. Has to become a beast tamer collecting beasts. Did I mention he doesn’t even get revenge, he runs away like a puss.
It is bad. MC just recieved a unlimited ammo glock. Wow. Wtf
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Writing quality is goodStories well Thought out Story in world development needs a little work Hope against picked up pretty quickly Love to read more