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Like what the bloody hell i feel like I’m reading the future version of legend of the dragon king silver haired girl golden and silver inside the kid and tang sect even copied the blue grass as spirit and emperor as upgrade even the time difference is the same 10000 years so lame
Omo! Good plot you got there. It will draw attention for sure. I thought of reading just one chapter to be able to give a review properly but it hooked me so I read the remaining chapters. Good job , update more.
tbh i still havent read the story .i was just drawn by the thick thighs ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
I wanna like this story but there is next to no story development and frankly there is not a single character that I genuinely like, just ones I dont hate... or well, really hate. I definitely wanna mention that it's fine to have a main character start out weak, but it's extremely frustrating to read a story in which the character is set up to fail and be made a mockery of around every corner no matter what he does. This was especially unfortunate at one point where th mc used his brain to set up a trap just to fail at the last second for a totally avoidable reason that came out of nowhere. In 80 chapters we got one sneak peak into what's special about him and will presumably help him become strong at some point, but even then the focus was much more on how that ability is limited instead of how the mc will build up on that ability. Which I feel is just not enough to balance out the frustration that builds up while reading.
Now at the end I wanna say that I do feel like the author is improving and the story might very well get more engaging at a later point but you might wanna start reading from chapter 50 like suggested because before that point it is genuinely jarring to read, not because of grammar or anything but because of the above mentioned reasons.
I think this has great potential, writing quality is not the best, but the story line and the character development is very realistic. I can't wait to see where this leads.
Very interesting book! I love the flow. Looking forward to read more. I learned new things. And the more I read the more I get curious about what will happen next. Job well done. Keep it up
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im happy because the author adds classical songs in the story (bcos im a sucker for classical music lol) and not only that, the way the author describes is so beautiful. the story is great, keep up the good work!
Awesome digusting shit
Can't stop my laughing after reading this this story make my day. Story is illogical MC is dumbass pervert too much grammar mistake and chapter came out very late but it's too good to read
I've only read the first chapter and this is already hilarious. I would totally recommend this for this who like both action and comedy blended perfectly together.