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I just completed reading 38 chapters. This is a real gem that I have been searching for months. The last time I read same type of novel (1976- I think that's the name - also try reading it for readers who love such novel types) but who so ever read that that novel they will come to understand me. U will definitely be immersed in this novel while reading too.
As a start, this story is in all aspects different.
We all know what a system novel is, tons of cliches about it but hell! This combination is bizarre yet intriguing.
The plot is paired with colourful characters, good writing and an overall smooth undertone.
5/5 recommend, you'd be losing a gem if you go elsewhere.
I like the Man CHaracter very much. He very handsome. Upload more chapter please. I'm waiting for the new chapters. More chapter. More chapter. More chapter. please.
It's great! I've never read anything with this plot. Power is taken for a price. That's what I always wanted. The characters development is great and very detailed. go on author!
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I like this novel. I like how the characters develop slowly through the story. ? Love the story ?. Many hidden things are there in the plot. All are revealing slowly like peeling an Onion ?. Waiting for the remaining story to unravel totally.
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The author expressed concern about novels that don't explain their magical systems very well, and I am fully in agreement. However, this guy isn't just talk. He actually followed through with his criticisms and explain how magic actually worked properly! Therefore, I think that this deserves a read, if only for the properly explained magic system!
If you want to read a story with logic, forget this one. I don't know why is it difficult for most webnovel writers to have self consistent logic.
Your story is interesting, great background and plot, i think your Mc is really nice too, yes, it has one and two grammatical errors, but that is normal, i expect to see more chaps and you did a great job overall amazing story.