A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
Already 131 chapters. WARNING! This is a spoiler, ignore it if you don't want spoilers.Chapters 1-131 are the first protagonist, Xiao Chen. He appears the most because he is the main protagonist in this arc.Chapters 24-38 are the second protagonist, Xiao Yan. The protagonist with an inheritance from the previous Qin emperor.Chapters 78-89 are the third protagonist, Han Feng. Protagonist with the system.Chapters 115-131 are the fourth protagonist, Ji Yuena, reincarnation of the great empress.Chapter 131-??? Lin Fan, he is the rebirth emperor.
The only thing I think it's lacking right now is the mc is not very scheming, ruthless and cunning i mean if someone comes back from their death and get a second chance they still being pure is very low. I am not comparing here but I think you can take some hints from the novel "Conquering the Novel" by "Enigma0" and then it will be one of the best novel.
Hey guys! Yeah the author's review...If you are looking for a story with game elements and a lot of action, do try this book.As the author, I will be giving it a five star review, but I'll also try to keep up with the review.Writing quality: I aim to keep spelling and grammatical errors to minimum and you can also expect the Writing quality to improve with every chapter.I plan to keep the school arc short while all the characters will grow as the story progresses.The world background will also be clear and detailed.So, please do leave a review and vote if you like the story.
Keep up the good work, don't let bad people keep you down.
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Idk if this guy is translating or copy and pasting what is already translated from asada translations but the first 100 chapters are already translated there. This story is my favorite novels and I normally can't stand vr stuff, but anyway, this novel deserves a 4.5 or so but since this guy didnt give credit or say if he was translating it or not I'm giving it a 3. It's great and I would definitely read it if you like protagonists that arent stupid and dont care about common sense. I would also read it from asada translations cause it has more translated currently. The story's title is "Reader" on NU and asada translations.
One of the first novels I read. The plot is pretty typical looking back, but it didn't ween me off wuxia at the very least. Not sure how I would enjoy it now with a few other novels under my belt to compare it to, but I'm certainly not reading this beast again.
Story is ok has sone potiential. Tiny inconsistencies throughout novel, not a big deal but puts a damper on the fun. Overall it would be worth a read if there were more chapters. So far only read 4 so will need to see later when more chapters are released
I read upto 7 chapters until now. But in that short amount of content, I found several things that ruined my reading experience of this story. They are
A) the adopted father that teaches the Mc summoning magic. The method of teaching is 'stubborn teacher(with low IQ and efficiency) teaching a naive student' cliche.
B) it took him 1 whole year and 99 defeats to realize that he needs to summon weaker monsters to shorten the summoning time (this type clichéd shounen story rubbish that ruins my reading experience of fantasy stories).
C) a girl in their school invites him to join their society/club despite knowing that it might cause him more troubles and her over-reacting arrogant club-mate objecting to on his invitation exaggerating manner (clichéd manner, that too in library).
Stubborn/stuck cup teacher, naive shounen Japanese type Mc, trouble bringing supporting characters and arrogant side characters. These are clichéd plot points that ruins a stories these days and all these are present in first 7 chapters of this novel.
(Maybe I read to many Japanese stories developed a revulsion to them.)
I don't think i have ever read a story with a dumber mc than this story. the title misleads you to believe someone with common sense will be in the story. Reading this so has cause my disappointment to be immeasurable and my day is ruined.
THIS IS SOOO D*MN GOOOD!!! You will LOVE IT!! Exciting, great characters, terrific story, refreshing, with so moving love moments... She’s a badass assassin, he’s the King. She’s ice,he’s warming fire. Author,we’re waiting. I totally recommend this novel!!!! SOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOD!!!
Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more! ?