Best trial read out of the batch. I love the small stories, where we get to learn about a person's past. I see lots of potential in this one.
thought it would be good but its really quite boring
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I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging
very very good .....................................................................................................................................
Actual garbage
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there a few typos but an enjoyable book so far.
the pacing is a little quick but good for a web novel. could help to be a little be generous with describing the monster girls and maybe add some more banter between the MC and his system .
Good translation speed, world building, characterization, plot development...really, Everything is good except the MC.
I don’t get why that is. Side characters are great, but the MC seems to not be tethered at all!
He’s the type of MC that’s selfish, stupid, stubborn and arrogant but genuinely believes that he’s DOING GOOD despite causing world-wide (economic, politic, and social) disasters, misery, and destroying innocent lives all over the place. A bad sexist hypocrite at his finest. At this point, I honestly believe that it’s only plot armour that prevents the rest of humanity from banding together and eliminating him before he causes more harm.
It's a nice book and would like to read it to the end ,but why isn't it updated anymore?
All in all an op main Charakter who goes around the world to seek his weapons
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Yup! plz more updates.
Update as much as you can. it will be very beneficial to you as well as the reader. Don't keep us in suspense.
Good luck for your novel.
I'm not a fan of vampires but this book is not just about vampires but about different kinds of creatures. I really like this book and the way it's going...