The world building and attention to detail in this novel is amazing! Seriously, reading was intriguing and like a mini adrenaline rush at times! Especially in the first chapter. It's been a long time since I've been so invested in a book so early!
What I truly appreciated was that the world detail didn't stop after that point though. The author continued to create both suspense and a vivid picture as we continued.
The spelling and grammar were also great, which obviously goes a long way in holding the flow of the story.
He changes how the Mc normally acts when around love interest for example when she lives in his home temporarily she invites her friend to live with her he normally would have kicked her out but decides to do nothing. Said friend poisons Mc instead of killing her he just leaves her be with no hard feelings.
Hi Fallen Ghost!
I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration.
While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place.
Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter.
The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by!
Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!
Writing Quality five star
Stability of Updates five star
Story Development five star
Character Design five star
World Background five star .
The characters are awesome, the writing is great and the background is just perfect I love it. Well done author
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This is the first novel I am writing where the MC's morals and actions can be questionable. But for those wondering if MC is 'evil' or not, it is quite a difficult question to answer since it all comes down to perspective. However, I can confidently say that he is a 'Demon' indeed. Those readers who like virtuous heroes or with certain righteousness in MC should think twice before reading.
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I've really enjoyed reading this story so far and will continue to do so with any updatesI really hope this doesn't get dropped like so many stories on this site
I have nothing to say but three words, it's just art
is this novel dropped? no update for a long long time.although slight cringy sometimes ,still I find this novel satisfying. .. .. . .. ... .