I think the story is good. I like the way author has written the character and scene details.
Looking forward to more releases, keep up the good work
The plot and the characters of the story are great. The protagonist is developing really well. I love that there is a bit of horror and at the same time it is funny also. Please continue the translation.
Pathetic utter waste of plot it was good until some Chinese supreme ideology started in this book basically all other countries are devil moron and Chinese are the most cultured blah blah
Also they depicted Indian gods as devils mind it Shiva the destroyer can decimate a Chinese dragon(or a evolved snake) thousands of times over so mind it.
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Seemed interesting. I thought, Hey a story about a sytem that slowly turns tbe mc into a fill blown vampire, neat right? While the idea is certainly cool, and the world backgrojnd at least plausible in the sense that its slightly different from the usual people from regular earth now have powers trope, its...dull.The characters are currently extremely shallow, there is the most strange contrivances and forced behavior. Now trust me I want to enjoy the story but the amount of hand waving required is rather high. Im at the point where its required that I simlly forget about any semblance of logic or reasoning. Heck even just basic plot flow requires me to have immense suspension of disbelief. Tbe idea has great merit. The method the author uses to slowly change the mc into a monsterous creature is neat. The actjal implementation within tbe story and how the mc and surrounding characters react is not neat. Its dull.Keep trying author, I am sure you will make it better and better as you go. Just dont force stuff. You want something to happen, ok, them think about the most logical and realistic way it could happen in the world setting. Dont just force things to occur a la deus ex machina, hand wave miracle juice. Good luck!
At the age of five, the main character already communicates with the emperor like a friend, has a wife for ten years who was raped. The main character immediately fell in love with her and paved her. The author has a clear desire for NTR. Disgusting heroes, weak plot, no sense of rhythm 0.1 / 10
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The premise of the story is cool. The characters have potential. But it an in coherrent mess which seems to be a first draft. I wouldn't recommend it. I hope that the author keeps going and gets better. They seem to have potential.
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Valla mierda el MC si sabes que no vas a ganar no vallas y déjalo a tu amigo y no hagas el ridiculizado o al menos gana una hdp aquí lo dejo solo por eso
Come here from the old version.I giving you a five star for the cover.Don't bother reading the rest Told you so.
Another Review from the Author. This time this is not as shameless as the first one since I will address complaints the readers pointed out. I know everyone wouldn't be pleased by this work of mine, however before going in, please read this first.This novel is written in First Person Perspective and with only one perspective which is the MC's.So everything you will be reading here were all taken from the MC's own eyes. His thoughts, what he experienced, everything. He's the source.I also took it upon myself to write while keeping in mind not to self-project myself in the novel. His thinking will all stem from the 16-year old mind who because of a sudden increase in clarity or intelligence or anything you could call it, tends to overthink most of the time. And well, there's also his adaptability so he won't react as you expected on something where one should start asking questions or be surprised instead he will fall into his overthinking habit.This is where the first complaint will be addressed.'I am weak.' You will be seeing him thinking like this at the earlier parts of the story. He's an overthinker and whenever something happened that's out of his grasp, he will immediately lean on that thought.Of course along the way he will outgrew that thought but yeah, some dropped this before that happened. He started from the bottom and I wanted to show what's going on inside his mind so his mindset at the earlier chapters will stay like that.For the second and third complaints, the Harem and the Side-characters . This is clearly tagged as a harem novel so expect the harem members will be introduced.'They were introduced but there's no substance in them. What are they thinking? Why did they do that? Why did they fall for him? etc.'As this is a FPP novel, of course, you wouldn't be privy to what the other characters in the novel are thinking most of the time. That's unless they pointed it out or explained it themselves. Though they're introduced, the times they interact with the MC were all situational and most of the time their real thoughts were still not showing on the surface. They're all moving and thinking by themselves in the background even without the MC looking at them, so the next time they will show up in his perspective, bits of pieces of what they're thinking and their personality will be exposed.I used this kind of writing on my first novel as well, slowly unraveling the personalities of the characters introduced. But since some of the characters will be left behind on their worlds and it's still unsure when they will show up again, they will feel flat.I understand that point but that's just how it is. Characters will not immediately open up to him but as their interaction with each other increased, you'll see the sides of them that's not shown during the first time they were introduced.'Not detailed enough. The description is too bland.'As this is something even I am not confident at. You will feel that his environment were not described properly. I suck at describing things and people but I'm trying to improve it through continuous writing and reading.I think this is everything. For the typo and grammatical errors, I can only ask you readers to point it out for me to fix. I only use Grammarly and Docs to correct the mistakes and surely they're not perfect.If I still missed a point that you feel like its a blunder of the novel, feel free to comment it below and I will answer them to the best of my understanding of my own work.Thanks for reading. :)