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Ok...I am shocked...
Beautifully written by the way. And I absolutely love how realistic and original it is. Overall, you did an amazing job. [img=recommend]
Not this kind of synopsis again...
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Once upon a time, there were 3 brothers named Somebody, Nobody, and Crazy. One day
Somebody killed Nobody, and Crazy run to the police station and told to the police that "Somebody killed Nobody" and the police asked "Are you Crazy" Crazy answered "Yes I'm Crazy" and he got kicked out.
I don't know what happened to WB but I have to say that the last few batches of trial novels are really not outstanding but disappointing to say the least. In this case you have the typical cliché of a young girl betrayed by her half-sister, stepmother, father and ex-fiance...she stumbled into the first man that crossed her road who magically is a young, rich, handsome and overbearing CEO who rules the world ....She got drugged, had *** and got pregnant... what to say? There's nothing new here!!! Continue your road! Worse in this badly written one everything happened in the first 10 chapters or so....you know how this will end up so why wasting time?
From chapter 206 this story just isn't fun anymore. Until the 'Faith energy' arc, the protagonist was respectable. He was multi-dimensional; he wasn't a two-dimensional puppet defined by one word (like 'righteous' or 'shameless'). Instead the protagonist was many things: cunning, strategic, patient, utilitarian and capable. Yet this all disappears in chapter 206 when the author quite literally squishes, and remoulds the protagonist's personality so he better fits into the themes of 'justice', 'positive karma', and 'righteousness.' The author goes as far as to hypocritically rebrand every single one of the MC's actions so far, justifying them under the banner of 'good' vs 'evil'. This story was never superb, but it was entertaining. Now the hypocrisy is just down-right sickening.
I like it. The plot is 100% plot armor but this novel will be fun for lets say 50-150chapters. In long term it will not work unless author will have lot of original ideas.
What can i say I've fallen deep into this pit and now i can't turn back so here i am embracing it and reading to my heart's desire so don't judge me
sigh.......... well, anybody know what the raws are? just a week or two before, I could atleast see what the raws were in webnovel, but now they're hiding even that. just great. Is it even legal to straight up take an authors work, change the name and leave no info as to what the original is?
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
People who enjoy western fantasy will appreciate this type or novel. The world building is fantastic with a lot of lore and attention to detail. The characters all have their own personality and help the MC grow on his journey. While the book has many positives, what i couldnt enjoy or relate to was the MC’s behavior. He is quite apathetic about life and has no desire for anything. He is enslaved and tortured numerous times yet bears no anger or thoughts about getting stronger. He does the bare minimum to survive and would have died countless times if it werent for his absurd bloodline. He also loses his friends/family (that we grow to like) and barely has any emotional reaction to it. I get that the author wanted him to be a flawed character who grows up through his trials and tribulations, but theres a point when it becomes too much. Especially when the character refuses to learn from his mistakes. I tried to excuse it saying he’s still a child, but after 200 chapters, I’m starting to really dislike the MC.
i like the story till now, it looks slightly fast but its okay but you have to slow it down a bit in the future.also im mad if that foxgirl dies ?doesnt matter if shes a demon or not. just "tame" her.