I'm glad to find this little gem of a novel really tired of the same old blunt heroe trope really like the characters so far looking forward to more.
It's a beautiful story and one of the best original fanfiction I've had in years. the only thing to say will be to have put the images of each girl, woman or character added because there are many characters from other manga or anime and for a person who has not seen or read all it is different manga that poses a problem of imagining what certain characters look like. Really hats off, it's a very good plot, I'm impatiently awaiting the continuation
this needs to be chosen I like a lot of the elements in this one :) have a happy happy happy 2022 even though me saying this is a little to late
Im not sure if my rating is on the spot. This novel is not brilliant nor horrendous, but I definitely can read it without a headache. The development is kinda slow, there is no useless mass info dump like skills and stats taking half a chapter so this is fine. I would recomend this novel
I swear to God, this is at least one of the 5 most infuriating translations I have ever read in my life. And this is coming from someone that's read several MTLs before. My goodness. The level of cringe in almost every sentence is so mind blowing, it's not even funny. The mc is just straight out bland, the writing is a complete mess with all the errors and the worldbuilding is still a mystery to me.
A truly amazing novel with a great main character that I personally like much. Moreover, the story is perfect with a great pace. Until now, I haven't found anything I would like to add to make it even better.
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Great story, Story opening of the story is really amazing !
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am I seeing things or was it the chapter supposed to be 67 or something?
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An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately hooks you in. Please keep writing.
The starting point of this story is very alluring to read , make you wanna read all the way and that's exactly what happened to my case . I've been reading this book continuously ever since I've started reading it for the main reason that as the story progress , the plot itself never fails to impress me over and over again .
And one thing I might add , at this point , the term ` like ` will be an understatement for I really really LOVE the MC and everything about him .
This book is one of the greatest novels I've ever read and I strictly recommend it for those who are really interested in an Action - Adventure genre themed with system application kind of a novel .
Believe me , you won't regret reading this novel EVER!
Gotta go and continue reading ! Ba - Bye !