The grammar is fantastic, albeit some errors, it's still polished...great buildup, amazing character, world building, thrilling action scenes which is outstanding amongst other qualities...I feel the premise could have been as compelling as the progressive chapters (2)... but I sense that this is a book no one should miss. it's got potential and there is still room for improvement.[img=recommend]
Dear author post this novel on the fanfiction side. You may have to add a new book as a fanfic but it's worth it. Readers rarely check the the novels section when they think of fanfics. So please re- release the chapters. Hope to see you soon.
im very upset that you have not finished this book if you have a problem then just go with the flow but please finish this book. I was going through such depression then I found this book and a couple others that you wrote then stopped those as well please I'll give my left hand for you to finish this one plese
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The translation is terrible. Don't bother reading this. It is an absolute waste of time. You can barely understand what is going on. Where is the editor. How was this allowed on the website.
So, I am interested in the kind of stories that take place in a video game, and most of them usually do make for interesting stories. The worldbuilding in this book is exactly how I imagine worldbuilding in MMORPGs. The main protagonist is likable, the characters are well-developed, and the way the story flows and moves is addictive and charming to read. This is a great book!
An upgrade system? Truly a novel i dont want to read tbh but i have no choice i cant help but at least give every trial read novel a try unless the synopsis has stuff about romance or harem in it.
i had high expectations honestly. i always liked op mc with a very big advantage, always loved it, but why did it had to start with conflicts one and another, and basically every woman here accompanies trouble. I wish it started different, but now its just conflict left and right, to resolve one conflict, he creates another conflict *facepalm*. With all these advantages, imagine if it started differently, he could've accumulated big slaps instead of small slaps.
not going to lie I love it but I'm kinda confused if his name was Apex or was it Jiang don't worry my review won't go dwn by such a small thing I enjoy your work keep up the good work
Best comedy novel recently. The MC reincarnated and get recruited as a spy with superpowers from all the patients in his last life. In normal case, his personality is so bad that being a spy should be impossible but they did some reverse psychology so technically no one would know he was a spy because he doesn’t look like one or act like one. Though they didn’t expect much from the MC because he had no training but he prove them wrong with superpowers. His goal is to make the enemy love him. That’s what I got so far from my reading. (Possibly a harem novel)
A pretty good read, but the author definitely needs to get an editor to fix the grammar mistakes. The story is nice though and it reminds me of Reincarnated as a Sword.
I have read about 15 chapters from all the 42 chapters published so far.
The plot had me glued and before I knew it, I had completed 15 chapters. I love science fiction and this book promises to give something in return maybe like the Philadelphia experiment or time travel. The incidents seem to project towards such an eventuality.
The writing quality is ok. A few grammatical errors, however, not interfering with the plot of the story.
The stability of updates is apparent as already 42 chapters are published. The story is developing nicely and the world background and the Character designs are well device.
All the best , Author!