To Steal God

I refuse to believe this novel was more voted for than some of the others ones. They're not even trying to hide their under the table deals at this point.

read authors review and the comments then you'll fined out the reason, that's all i got to say .                                                     .

Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural. Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.Overall I'm liking the story so far.

This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.

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Leroux let out a sigh and shook his head, looking high up in to the west and making eye contact with Leon. Leon nodded his head and Leroux took out a pouch from his belt, throwing it on the floor.