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bro u r novel is good but characters names are quite confusing...............................................................................
This is a great novel with an suberb world building,
The cliche is barely minimum and the story is awesome , the author focus on every character present , very less mistakes which will annoy you
but one thing that i would like to change about this novel is making only one main character and making him a lil highlighted that would make this a polished gem
really a very good xanxia loving this the updating stability need to be increased a lil
( I would recommend you to try this novel if you are a fan of xanxia
thanks
This is the current live version of the book. please read here. The other locations will not update with the new chapters. Chapters will come out M-F, based of US time zones. Bonus chapters will drop for reaching goals.
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Just finished up reading these 30 chapters and I love it. I need more please don't drop it. Keep up the good work.............................
author i like to andvice you add charracter image and i like your novel in the plot soo far be the way i hope you could upload daily because how amazing the novel and i hope you could add artifac or body techique for our mc and i love this novel soo far comparable to dual cultivation keep it up author
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after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .after chapter 60 the translation got worst .
if you're here for the same reason as me, which is for the villain tag, I'm sorry but here's just the disappointment in this aspect because despite the protagonist having a tremendous hatred for humans, he is very stupid and immature when the story involves no -humans because sarah herself manipulates him and he thinks she understands him after some events a non-human appears and guesses our protagonist considered a good idiot will save her in exchange for nothing and for me what can be unbearable was the fact that in chapter [spoiler] 22 and 23 because of a disagreement with this non-human he attacks a family and in the process instead of killing everyone, he for finding a girl who wants to sacrifice herself for the family, interesting he spares the family and still protects them against the rival family, [honestly he killed humans from a whole planet i doubt everyone was selfish and nothing tempting to sacrifice herself for her family and that's not even considering he's killed innocents and now he's found her acting like it's a human's first noble act]
