Okay.At the time I write this review, the first arc has been concluded. So far, the storyline and character developments are in their early phase, but remain solid nonetheless.The MC is a very clever person, kind to his family and allies, but has no qualms in eliminating any threats.He has the tendency to focus too much on magic and is sometimes self-centered, but I can guarantee that he's not a selfish and evil person.He's ambitious and tenacious. He's skilled, but not conceited. Most of all, he's human, so he's not perfect.I hope you all enjoy this novel as much as I loved writing it. Thanks, everyone.
Awesome novel! I've gotten completely addicted to your story. The plot is slightly overused but still original. Well, how do I put this... MC going back in time to save the world type of plot, but the objectives, enemies, and settings are totally different from what I've mostly read.The world is intriguing and unlike anything I've heard before. The fact that there is a 'GOD' ai is still a bit confusing to me and would like to know more about it. I have a lot of questions about it, like why is it evil? Why does the MC want to stop it other than to save the world? How did it become 'GOD'?The MC is smart, catches on to things quickly, and actually relatable. The story progresses at a perfect steady pace, giving enough time for the reader to actually understand and feel the feelings while also moving fast enough so that the reader doesn't get bored. The descriptions are on a whole nother level. They are vivid, visualizes the scene and situation perfectly and actually immersive. There weren't any confusing sentences so far and the action parts were really enjoyable to read. Most of the explanations were logical, natural, and some of them are actual facts. I learned several things that I didn't know while reading this novel. Respect to the Author for doing his research!Lastly, the thing I like most about this is the writing style. It's amazingly appealing, and catches my attention instantly. The sentence structures go well with other sentences and conveys the feelings the author wants. Some of the parts are witty and there are a few relatable sentences and jokes here and there. As a fellow author, I really envy your way of writing and would really love to learn to write like that.In short, I'll give this book a 9/10. I had to deduct a point because your work was so brilliant it made me jealous! Please teach me your way of writing, I simply can't get enough of it! Definitely going to keep reading to the end, no matter how many fast-passes I might have to sink in the future.To everyone reading the reviews, I would 100% reccommend this, especially if you like system and video-games genre. PS: I'm actually serious about wanting to learn from you. Would really appreciate if you can teach me.
Only on the early chapters so far but I am really enjoying the story it has the perfect mix of dark moments and comedy
Finally.......i been waiting for this one ever since it became available to vote, i have a really high hope for this one because the same author wrote my favorite "I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic"
Love the book so far it's amazing.
If you're kind enough, please leave an honest review. Your reviews will help me improve the story. If you have any problems with my way of writing or [of] the story itself, no matter how harsh they are, please tell so - so that I can fix them. And if you have any suggestions, I won't mind following them so that I will be able to improve.
[Chapter 30: REVIEW] The pace is a little slow as I prioritize (World Building) and (Character Building), especially of volume(1), where it focuses on MC - adapting to his new world. I tried to make the story a little better in the second volume, but it - of course, still has (World Building) for the knights, mages, and adventurers. And if you have read far enough up to Ch.30, you would have already realized that I mainly focus on action and comedy, character development already comes with it, and the 'slice of life' element is always in there. Easier to say, if you like this kind of genre to have a comedic blend, then I guess you would like it - but that's only my opinion, read it for yourself to find out.
[Notes:] Please be considerate as I'm not really that good of a writer, which I know much for myself. Lastly, if you ever like the story, do vote and put it on your collection. Every time their number increases, it's a great feeling.
Intereasting story with op mc that desperatly needs speller and editor. First 14 chapters have spelling issues but after it - it gets wors. After chapter 15 its sometimes hard to understand some of the meanings of it. I have pushed through it as the story itself is not bad. If you like fantasy world and op mc and can handle issues similar to google translation then you could give a chance to this novel.
Uhm guys, author here, I just want to inform you that I am just a kid and I go to school, so it would be very hard to publish 3 chapters a day, but ill try my best...
Also, this novel will only have 50k+ word count and 100+ chapters. So sorry if you expect a very long novel.
Also, in the future if I am done with this novel, I will create a second book, if I can...
Ciao,
Your Ugly Author
This is my first original novel that I worked on publicly. It takes place 2000 years in the future.
Main Questions
1. Will there be a romance? Yes.
2. Will there be a harem? Yes.
3. Will there be face slapping? Yes.
4. Will the be tragedies? Probably not, this will be a light hearted novel.
5. Will there be s*x scenes? Yes, they are planned, the chapters will be marked (+18)
6. Will the MC be OP? Yes, I will he will be, but I will try to keep him leveled without blatant nerfing.
I also sometimes read comments for inspiration, so never be shy about criticism. I will also try to explain things (or fix) things if necessary.
I hope you enjoy the novel!
For those of you who wonder why you have this novel in your bookstores. It's simple, I deleted the content of the other novel that had no future and I'm going to use it for this new novel. You are free to stop following this novel, I don't care at all (well, a little yes, XD), but I hope you can at least give it a chance.
Thanks for your time.
Hey... Like your story... it's a good read...
Just think you need to add more details about the world.
I start to crave it by the third chapter, and without it I don't really understand the explanations about the 'old monkey'.
Even a few sentences in the second chapter about 'this world... is this...'
a lot less direct then what I just wrote, but keep going!
without the world the details don't mean as much...
if I knew where the 'old monkey' was from, even a few words after the word monkey, I would understand where they met, and know more about the story...
Nice writing quality
Good update
Good story development
Good character design
Nice world background !..........................................................................................!