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Wery good alternatiwe story from HP world.
We can seee what would hapend if Snape and Lily was together.
And what would hapen when James And his band lost people aprobate . ANd how hypocrite Poter and Black was..
I read up to the latest chapter and have to say this story is painfully slow. after reading my vampire system I was looking to quench my thirst for more vampire stuff but this is not it.
its seems webnovel are trying to go off the hype of vampire stuff
It's a shame because based on what some reviews said j thought it would be a good read.
I would like to start off this review by saying that webnovel needs more novels like this one. Dark ruthless evil main characters. I am very selective about these kind of books because most of the time the "evil mc" is a antihero at best and a secret good guy at worst. However this book does it right.
The book has shapeshifters as the main power of the world. Mc has a system and can power up by killing people. World building is enough to understand the big picture. The only problem I have with this novel is that ever time a new person is introduced the author shows the whole status\\what shapeshifter they are along with the str, agility,int etc.... this happens even when the person is killed in the same chapter as the status was listed. At this point I have read all the way until the premium and honestly I won't continue this book. I'm not going to spend money to unlock a chapter when that chapter is literally introducing characters to the story and listing every attribute they have...I don't care about the whole stats! A name and rank is enough.... Such as.
Name:Thomas
Rank:psudo-lord
Wish this novel was better as I said before we need more evil mc novels....sad day
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5 star of course! This is a 'beyond awesome' book. This is such a thrilling and engaging story, it's almost as if I was watching a movie; I could picture it in my head because the descriptions were so vivid. Thanks, author, keep up the good work.
Superb! One of the best books I have read so far. The author is simply incredible. The writing is one of the best I have read. You really have an amazing writing style that leaves the reader engaged and wanting more. The characters are lovable and simply amazing to follow as the story unfolds. The plot is so good and I honestly want to follow it to its climax. This is by far a 10/10 in everything I have talked about and I recommend it to everyone one who wants to read stories with the best quality. Great work to the author.
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I got this as a recommendation from my friend, marichat_nettenoir. I read this book quite quickly and I loved it. Kudos to the author
Can't wait to see where this novel goes. The writing is fairly good, with few grammatical or spelling errors. Great effort. Thanks Author!!!
After "Supreme Sect" and "The Scion of Soma & Indra" this is another masterpiece. The use of Characters from Mythology, Ancient and Modern History and the little changes to the names of those character make this interesting. It contains Magic, War and Politics. The conversation between characters make it a fun ride.
well its exactly how I rated it....good grammar and update stability but the rest is really bad...it looks like the author is not older than 14(max) ....to many discrepancies ...
