Hey! Just started on this website! Glad my first book was yours! Love the suspense, But I think the story is moving a bit too fast! I want to know what the character is thinking about while doing the deeds that he commits. Anyway I will follow your Patreon! I want the early chapter! so keep on releasing them early so I can read them before everyone here can! Thanks so much
The story is not repeative. it's very interesting book. I really love the world building. the mc is also great. one thing which I like most about this novel is its concept. it's similar to REVERED INSANITY and GREED : ALL FOR WHAT? .it really kept me entertained. thanks I hope you can increase the release pace.
Should change the name of this book to: "I locked the chapters early so people won't read it, so nyah nyah nyah!"
Rejection is cruel, and I want to feel bad for the mc but he's just too cruel lol. His anger was sort of justified but directing it to the innocent was terrible lol. Good book though
This is actually a translation of "Killing Grounds of Gods and Devils". It's pretty old, with the original release being in 2010. From what I can tell, it's also pretty good though still has some of the common cliches and issues of other novels.
I really like this story. It's hard to find a good story wehre the MC doesn't get a cheap cheat and has to work for almost ewrything. I also like how the story gives a good point how it would be possible for it to work and not some random luck. But please explain the characters more.
All I can say is that this is funny asf
There are a lot of these sign in novels lately
I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.
Been looKing for evil ruthless mc for While. This Is what am looking for give no p00p about girl.
Mc can do everything and anything to reach his goal, thats nice.
Just caught up to the latest chapter.
Can't wait for more.
Writing Quality: Some grammar stuff. You can understand what is being said. Nothing too jarring, just needs a couple of passes for refinement/tidying up.
Updates: Just caught up, so don't know the schedule. But the author seems to keep the readers in the know with Author's notes.
Story Development: Standard gaming stuff. New game comes out, MC and friends start playing, dungeons/quests, meet new friends, repeat, etc. Mostly in-game progress, not much IRL progress except for mandatory logouts/rests.
Characters: MC seems good. Has some quirks that his friends understand/playfully use against him. He has a history that I would like to know more of.
Roommates need more fleshing out. But that maybe due to the MC not wanting to pry into his friends' personal lives.
New set of guildmates have been introduces, will see how they mesh with everyone else.
World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Hyper-Intelligent Learning AI. NPCs that look/act real. Different areas/severs for every nation.
I've read hundreds of webnovels at this point but this is the first review I've ever given. Quite frankly this is one of the best novels I've read and it keeps me page refreshing, waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
This is a new and novel idea for a story with a system, through all my searches I have found no other approaching gaining wealth with a system in modern society quite like this.
I implore you, dear readers, pick up this novel and you won't regret it, or at least you won't anything that fulfils a rise to wealth and power so excellently and innovatively; yet plain insight, anywhere else.
If you don't read it for your own sake, I beg you, read it for mine so I can keep reading and the chapters continue to come.