Writing is ok, story is messy and confusing, some dialouge is cringy especially the nightmare guy though I think he's supposed to be like that, the update speed is fast though
The story is something new for, but I like it so far. I liked the plot, the characters, and also the humor sense. It's totally good - can't help but to wait for what's coming next.
Ten chapters in and I‘m already hooked.As expected of the author of rebirth of the strongest guild master, this is already a masterpiece.I hope he continues to write this. I’m really looking forward for future chapters.
After reading 17 chapters, It is just a nonsense family melodrama. How is this novel's genre is Magical Realm? The genre categorization is so misleading.
I did not even beginn reading and all the Rewiews are about what a trash rasict that thing calling itself Author is.........................
Another sign in genre but far weaker in term on sign in itself. Stuck for 12years old due to author trying and fail badly in making his sign in special, and then he leave it vague.. Like what he sign in, when he sign in, where he sign in... Everything is vague and only a few important one that he mention has been used..Anyway, its sucks. The only different here is the reward he get is from Chinese manhua like storm riders, and legends of the emperor.. Old classic manhua that is cool, I suggest you to go and find the manhua... Not this novel though, its sucks..
The story of this novel is quite interesting for me, although the writing still needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter to me. this novel is good
HANDSOME FEMALE LIKE CUTE BEAUTY PROTAGONIST, COLD INDIFFERENT ATTITUDE, DARK PROTAGONIST, BATTLE MANIAC, OVERPOWERED, REINCARNATED PROTAGONIST.TSK.. TSK just like what I wanted ?
This was definitely botted up to first place.However, anything is better than the vampire system book which was taking first place before this. So I’ll give it a 5 star for the heck of it.
I have a habit of noting down Pros and Cons when I give a book review.So starting with the Pros:I definitely feel there is an interesting plot here. I was curious to see where the main storyline actually began. You have written a good summary as well. It made me want to read on to get to the actual plot of the book. I feel you have good setup for your lead character for his eventual character growth. Guy is at this worst point and struggles with his current lifestyle. It gave me the impression that he'll eventually grow out of that and I was intrigued as to find out how he would do so.Now for the cons:There are a large number of grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout your book. It was almost jarring to read some of the setences because of this. You have also used many words incorrectly. I found several instances where you have used certain words which have a completely different meaning that what you intended. I would strongly suggest to recheck your earlier chapters because the mistakes there are quite vast. Lastly, I found the first 4 chapters to be very slow. Not much happens. I understand you were trying to show the readers that Guy is living in very bad conditions but honestly, it's been dragged on way too long. I was looking forward to get to the actual plot but it was chapter after chapter of Guy hating his life. Felt unnecessary.Overall I feel the amounts of mistakes I found definitely hindered the experience for me. I do believe this story could be very interesting, judging by the summary. I wish there was more focus on the plot and less dragged out descriptions of Guy's lifestyle. I wish you all the best because you have potential for improvement. I'd really like to give it another read once you've made a couple of changes.
I think this is the Author's best book. Even if the start might seem slow, the buildup is thorough, and the MC seems to know his disadvantages and advantages.
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