This novel main character has his completely different mindset i love his approach and thinking i like it and the the store are different to check it out for different experience
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the story is good, and the MC is hesitating or don't have clear goal but that was before the last two chaptershope don't get dropped before his next reincarnated or how the MC death !overall the story has potential
After reading the book I just couldn't help but write a review. Author, this book is AMAZING. I can't express how much I enjoy it. From characterization to the story line, you have done amazing on the story. And to top it all off, chapters 205-208 are amazing, I cried, and I do mean I CRIED. I truly hope that you will continue this book until it has passed 1,000 chapters
I hope this is not another copy I had read like this type of novel x4
very intrusting and good novel, but can you please tell me where is the next part of this novel i can't find it here. please tell me tha name of next novel or othervise tell me where can i find the next episodes..
Into the Zombie World is a book of fiction written by Neil_Ads. The story revolves around a man named Nile who sought to survive a zombie apocalypse after his untimely death by being bumped by a truck.
The author uses present-tense. Well, it is a good story. Personally, what I love about the book is Nile's intelligence and the way he reacts to certain things. He thinks logically, making the right choice except for the store as he could've looted the first three houses instead of choosing the store.
I love his plans and schemes to get rid off or defeat zombies. I think there is a mixture of futuristic technology since there is this so called system that displays certain things. I'm not used to reading these kind of novel mixtures.
Anyway, the grammar and punctuation is definitely one thing the author must improve. Yes, it uses present-tense but because of this, it seems more like a guy telling actions rather than a describing and story-telling. He is walking, He is going, he is banging, things like that should be changed.
Because of this, it lacks emotions and some elements of a horror novel. You could describe the zombies more rather than using Big, small, fat, or sharp teeth. I didn't feel any suspense except for the parts in which the dialogues weren't aplenty.
I would like to suggest that you describe things like this:
Example:
His leg were trembling.
Try going to the next level:
His legs were noodles.
Or to add more suspense and frightening elements, I would suggest:
Example:
The silence shrouded his mind. (Lacks emotions)
"Once the quietness arrived, it stayed and spread in Estha. It reached out of his head and enfolded him in its swampy arms…sent its stealthy, suckered tentacles inching along the insides of his skull, hoovering the knolls and dells of his memory, dislodging old sentences, whisking them off the tip of his tongue."
Something like that. Well, I hope this honest criticism helped out!
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This is a very interesting novel. It is really well written. There are no unnecessary fillers or cliches.
I have always been a fan of a werewolf novels
it's makes me feel happy and never want to stop until I finish reading
and your books make me full of joy when reading
highly highly I said I highly recommend this
good job author
This book is a hidden gem...Story started slow but background is amazing without any loophole..I find chapter 5 to chapter 8 ..somewhat boring but next 2 chapter is op...thanks for the chapters