taichi6717
An amazing story, I can't help but applaud the author. It never seemed cluttered or boring it is exciting from start to finish which is a testament not only to how good the author is at writing and how much effort he put into making this story fascinating.
An absolute masterpiece, I am waiting for the second volume of this Holy Monke Scripture, the story of our simian overlord is purely fantastic Monke Bless
This is good, keep it up author HAREM IS LIFE
Thai is very good and quite funny, though would prefer if you fix your grammar mistakes, but overall quite a good read, though don't make the character too op too fast.
not bad, but i still cant really judge with just 33 chapters, i like it so far though, seems promising.
SPOILER:
in chapter 34 i whole use daze on the man with the crossbow and also if they are still alive after the mana flames, then Beatrice could have some fun, and also levelling up a couple of times from EXP from killing them, for example by gagging on her rod to death jejejeje.
Impressive world-building an idea that is all based on. I enjoyed reading very much and it leaves me wanting more and to know what happens when the MC's true power is revealed to the world. It also leads to ideas and assumptions where did the dungeons come from? What is the monster's motives? How could this all end. All questions the author has plenty of room to develop and eventually answer through masterful storytelling and writing. Great job author don't quit, you have something unique and extraordinary in your hands.
The story is intriguing. It's well-written and the plot is unique. The flow is smooth. There's mystery and it makes the reader want to learn more and read further. The characters are fully fleshed and their personality shines through the author's words. Actions and details are well descripted.
Good work author! I will continue reading...
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
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Amazing story very good the plot is very good, the personality of the protagonist is amazing if all the villains were like that it would be much better, the harem or the heroines are amazing especially the Empress or his wife
Well.… i read Up to chapter 10 and what can i say? My rating speaks for itself. 99% of the time a trial read novel is rubbish. Would not recommend for people Over the age of 2.
I feel my brain rotting from reading this, I understand autht tries to make the start dramatic with the suicidal girl, but seriously it is a stupid reason and is as complex as ugly guy takes pics of girl so now time to die. If she is gonna end self anyway just kill guy with the pics I read till chap4
