The story was engaging and captivating, and I found myself fully immersed in the world and characters. The plot was well-crafted and thought-provoking, and I found myself constantly on the edge of my seat. The author did an excellent job of bringing the story to life and making me feel like I was a part of it.
This story is good, honestly I was hooked after reading just the first chapter the plot is new and the character is relatable good job to the author ❤️❤️❤️
You ever gonna pick this up author?
I wouldn’t even mind like a 100 - 200 page short story. Just so we can see some connection to your other novel which I also enjoy!
Thanks
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong
Not enough chapters, okay titles, terrible characters, story is boring and holds no exciting plots... out of infinite points i would give 10000000000000.00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001
Nice read ! Go try it if you like a more logical approach tu cultivation.
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Please stop using resistance as a stat. Resistance is something you overcome using stamina. It's a great story but every time I see that I want to pound my head against the wall in frustration.
It has nothing to do with the synopsis lol ……………………………
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This book is a mix of slice if life and fantasy which make it great as those are two good genre's mixed together and the author managed to bring out the best of both.
At the moment I am writing this the book has 30 chapter and thy are all great, there have hardly been any big mistakes I have noticed and the author keeps a good update schedule. The author also reacts to our comments so you can tell he puts a lot into this story. The only reason I could give this book a perfect rating is because it's only in my 3rd of my top 5 books I always read.
Writing Quality: 4* Enjoyable
Stability of Updates: 5* Excellent
Story Development: 4* I Like where it's going
Character Design: 4* I like how the characters look(through my imagination)
World Background: 3* More will get revealed I hope
The total score: 4.0*
Hi I'm the author, I just re-released the rewrite. I don't know the best way to do it, so I delete all the previous chapters. It seems a bit buggy in the app, so you need to keep scrolling to the right to find the new chapters.