It has great potential and the translation is getting a little better as time goes I really like the story it is a bit cliché but every story has a turning point when the plot gets a better objective hope they will continue translating I am looking forward for more
well story is ok and I have read 6 or 7 chapter and I have read a comment on faloo and from the chapter the daughter is actually not from future or something it's just the female lead's twin sister who act like future daughter in front of him and well talks to him ,though system is real
this novel is amazing overall it has an amazing storyline with great characters to go along with it and the way it plays out makes you wanna know what will happen next in total I suggest you read this.
I can’t believe I read this non-sense… seriously, this novel’s so random that it’s not even funny. Non-sense netizens are normal, but the counter attack (from mc’s elite and oh so smart disciples) are bullsxxt. Not to mention that they can’t find their master for so long when they are so powerful (I don’t believe he can hide from them in his dementia state).
My advice, don’t waste your time.
i really like these kind of novels hope it get picked.......................................................................................................
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Quality drops after chaptrer 40, plus alot of filler that becomes nauseating to read. Before chapter 41 its still a decent read though. A decisive main character with some grounded logic, while also having some refreshing wit. Its a fun read, too bad the translation and story development drop considerably.
MC is too stupid, always doesn't move in team battles..waiting for all his friends to lose and then he fights alone against all enemies..
If the MC fight together with his friends, maybe his friends won't get hurt..
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