because no one gift bad review then let me be the first one ??. 500 IQ is something that we can call magical you know. for someone like that he doesn't need cheat like almighty system' to become number one on the world even if the world is full of magical thing. Like Megamind who become number one villain without need for superpower. I think you really don't understand what is 500 IQ means
Very good story! Gripping intro and very nice flow of conversation. Rameez is a likeable character that I can kinda relate to. The interactions between characters is my favourite part of the novel.
This novel is definitely a hidden gem. The concept behind it is extremely unique and heated battles take place all the time. As the mc is super op, so it's satisfying to see him conquer Avalon. If you like books with action stacked upon action, you will definitely enjoy this masterpiece. Great job Author!
I enjoyed reading your novel, but the story in the end of chapter 2 was cut, haha. But im still proud of you i like the plot twist of your story, Im satisfied on how you make the story mysterious in the end of the chapter. Im still curious on how hannah takes care of marc because of the injuries he has. Despite that, i kinda love your novel i want to read more friend!!???
I had come here for the yuri, but gotten a lot more instead. I had reached the paid chapters (75) and despite there being little to no yuri, (prob cuz they are 4yrs old right now) when I read this story, everything was done so well and so interesting that I didn't even have time to look for mistakes. The only thing I can remember is that the word real was missing the -l in one sentence, I had no qualms about the writing quality, the SOU, the Story Development, not the Character Design. Let me not forget, the World Background was an amazing piece of work as well. This review is kind of biased since I do love Pancakes (author), but it shouldn't be far from the truth, I encourage you all to read this wonderful story, you will like it, and if you don't, keep reading and then you will like it; yes, I am saying your only option is to like it because you will like it.....
i love Harem novel. it is the trend now. As most novels with single romance is low in favour. on a side note. if it is only 2 girls in the harem, the novelty of the Harem will slowly slip away from the reader favourite. Cheer Up and Good Luck!
I have to say that this book isn't bad at all. Like the idea of having the MC be a bit different from the usual MC's we see, in terms of race. It's a breath of fresh air. I also like how the conversations flow. The dialogue between the three friends make the book a but more lively, so that's another plus... Now for the cons... There's a lot of unnecessary info being dumped in all at once, especially in the first chapter. There are minor grammatical errors that can't be noticed easily and more than a few punctuation errors. The Way it is written in first person is also a big turn off for me (personal issue). It think the story would be better if told in third person. Overall, is till think this is a good one, as it is very comfortable to read. 4.0/5.0... ?
It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish It’s a fun story and unique idea It’s a fun story and unique idea hope they finish it
I will say please make more chapters I think this has a lot of potential and is rather unique as I have not seen any other novel like this one
Why don’t you follow me and become Komo’s apprentice?
Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!
Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!
Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life! When the Lord Komo appears, who dares to cause strife! Have faith in the Lord Komo, gain Eternal Life!
This story is getting a reboot with a third person perspective and a new story
The name of the reboot is
Alight-A Supernatural
It will contain new characters which are obviously not so many as this story
I have improved what was wrong with Naturals and put it in Alight
Hope you check it out
We need a dragon pet