Story is way too rushed.
It has potential but it is ruined by the fast pacing. Everything is happening neck to neck with no break in between. As such, there are many plot holes left.
great fanfic
mc with nagatos power is incredible
making him seek peace is like we have a real nagato in mha which isnt bad its a great idea and that the omni potent god
is going to send 3 naruto characters there is a fantastic idea would be funny to see his reaction later. it is great how that you dont follow the plot so you can use your own ideas. all in all it is a fantastic fanfix
So much lost potential in favor of games. The start was amazing with its promised focus of biology and history. but 40 chapters in the story in the real world has become more important that the story in the sandbox.
I mourn for the lost potential.
This is a really engaging read and I love how the novel is progressing so far. Everything seems to be of a good quality and I don’t have any major criticisms- I can’t wait to see what comes next :)
I have read this novel up to about 120 chapters in Chinese. And miraculously, there are no racists here. They should choose this novel if they have eyes!
Enjoyed this when it started but later on, it started devolving into nationalist sturvs (although where I am in it isn't as bad yet) but what started turning me off was when martial arts started coming in. I felt like this was supposed to be a sci-fi or modern advancement novel and then martial art was brought somehow in-between and tried to make it look better than ordinary genetic modification. In one hand I was getting used to gene points and now I'm suddenly hearing dantian
As usual, Sloth's work never ceased to amaze his readers. Follow Layn if you love the genre. I was reading the book from chapter 13 before reverted back to chapter 4 - 5 - 6 for the new kind of language sloth created just for the sake of his novel. And then, I return to chapter 1 again to savor the beginning of the story once again.
This won't be the last of lazy sloth. It's a masterpiece.
The book have a very interesting premise and the writing quality is superb. However, there are many things that I noticed about the novel that drags it down. The story developes in a very weird and confusing was that make it hard to follow or understand. Importent things and features are added in randomly without any explanation really on what they do and their importance to the overall story. The MCs thought process can be said to be cunning but also a bit one tracked minded. One example of this is when MC kills someone and obtains a new cultivation system, and decides to join that organization in the future to obtain the resources needed in the future when there is a million other things that needed to be done beforehand. The people's thought process in the novel just seem a bit out of place, with them doing things in certain ways to make the story work. This can be greatly attributed to the lack of info provided to us by the author. With random cultivation systems added and new things(treasures,seeds,currency ) introduced it just becomes confusing. The author tries to provide mystery and it is intriguing, but with the severe lack of knowledge regarding the current situation the mysterious aspects just becomes hazy and bring apon more confusion. The power system is also very complex, which is understandable in the world setting currently. The math in the novel is a but wonky but not too bad if u don't look into it too much. the power levels of individuals are all over the place with individuals killing people of way higher cultivation levels and being in places they shouldn't be. (one example is a heavenly god killing a dao emperor in the mortal realm, but is still a weakling in the ground scheme of things when dao emperors are the highest level Acheivalble). I have quite a dislike of the system which seems to be very out of place and provide random helpful things with little to none explanation. Maybe it's just me who find the book confusing with the lack of information, and others can decipher it fine. Overall the book is a decent read, and has a very interesting concept.
One of the best if not the best Star Wars fanfic on this site that I've read
The only problem that I have is the stability of updates that are three ⭐⭐⭐ at best
And it's a little bit fast paced almost to fast paced
Please don't drop and keep up the good work author
normally I'd have reduced the stars for updating stability but since it's free I'm giving you a 5 star review, really looking forward to more chapters
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when are u going to upload chapters? its been a while since this is here and i shill havent seen a single chapter. i also tried to search for the original novel but i couldnt find it.