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Everything is just so good. I just catch up with the latest chapter in one night without a wink of sleep. I even pay with coin. This is the first time I buy coins. It is that good. Totally recommended!!! Still a lot of mystery here, make me very curious. This is also the prequel of Last Wish System, the first contracted webnovel. TBH I haven't read that yet. I think I will be reading them now while waiting for this novel to update HAHAHA
As member of Milf-SECT i announce this is 5 ☆
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A unique concept.... For me cos i rarely see a book with this concept. A robot with a few flesh and blood? Cool! Lake made entirely of beers? Just imagining that makes me drunk!
Love this series! Just saw the new cover art, I really like it! You do a great job developing the word around Hera, It’s nice seeing the culture per say of the dungeon world. It’s a bit slow going in the actual plot, but that is picking up and I’m excited for them to get into the maze!
This is the worst rubbish I've read on this site, the only thing worse than a bad story is a good one ruined by st*pidity, this story could have been so much better, but the author just had to try and turn it to some kind of joke. It's disgusting
Story has a good startInteresting premisejokes are not forcedThere's Killer Ducksand probably a killer robotoverall can't wait to read more
obsessed with the characters and their continuity. it amazes me to read such a descriptive word, and I love the wordings of the very littlest things. keep up the good work, author!
The concept of the story is cool and the exaggerations of the characters make it hilarious to watch. I totally love the funny dialogues and the way they are put.It is weird and yet nice to be in a game. I could visualise the apocalypse and all the things described in the book.I only wish that I hadn't felt overwhelmed by the sudden physical descriptions of the characters. Otherwise, the story is going great and has wonderful ideas to make it seem like the next Hunger Games.I wish you good luck, Author!
Its a good read, but one thing keeps bugging me. The fact that he decided to go to the mortal world while with his insane awakened talent could have received the grooming of a top tier family of the higher worlds. Its the same as being born rich and then saying you want to become poor. He could have gotten the top tier resources of the higher world for free (because of his bloodline talent) but what does he do? Goes to the mortal world to fight for the scraps and bits of stuff that doesnt even hold a fraction of the value of the stuff he could have gotten from his family in the higher world. The author might have done it for the world building but there are other ways to do it. He could have received the resources of his family, but when he was on a journey, he was suprise attacked and fell to the mortal world involuntarily. He is forsaking top tier resources voluntarily. Although the going to the mortal world was a good move for world background, I must say that doing it voluntarily just makes the MC looks stupid. If he fell involuntarily, it would have been good and fine, but he fricking went there voluntarily. Even if he wants to go temper himself somewhere, he can do that anywhere else. He could challenge the geniuses of other famillies to temper himself or go on dangerous beast hunting journeys. Other than this irritating action, I would say the story is good.
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WHY MUST YOU TAKE ALL MY COINS AWESPEC!!!! But on a serious note all of this authors worls are amazing and all three easily make it into my top 5, if you havent already i would highly recommend checking out this authors other works. i find myself checking for new chapters (even with the privilege card
Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.
