I like the idea of a new Touya with the quirk of his mom. I like fanfictions like this because it breaths in a new feeling and shows new developments in the future.It is also slow for my taste but is not boring. I am looking forward for more...Keep up the great work author san!!
A terrible piece of garbage in a dumpster full of radioactive horse ****. To write something so awful is to commit a crime, and to enjoy this ****-soup is being an accomplice to one of the worst thought-crimes I've ever encountered in literature. If it were possible to give a negative rating I would have done so, and if you give this fucking travesty more than 1 star overall, you are objectively wrong.
Really hard to get into this novel, tried trekking on to see if it got any better but sadly it doesnt. Author's style of "teleporting" is very jarring and makes the pacing really off. If the synopsis of the novel has the author asking us to skip essentially 20-40 chapters because many people didnt enjoy the first 20 chapters, it really says something about the novel. Maybe a rework like they said they might do will improve it.
The Chinese characters aren't even gone right now. When the translation gets fixed, then I'll give an actual review in the comments. But until the novels gets fixed, I have no positives for this.
Master Of Erossu Book! It's cultivation novel with harem! Fluffy ladies are here as I, The young Paranoid, am the Emperor Of Fluffiness and Messiah Of Erossu. I make my own heart fluffy and yours as well. In the midst of the evil cultivators, we shall have our own fluff. Ok. So for now... it should be mostly be some fun and comedy with a bit of fighting... Yeah... we will see.
Man this is so good. Like my heart was gonna jump out at 130 chapter. Damm I was so excited that I didn't see that I have read all the chapter. Man it was so fucking pain full for my heart I just can't imagine. Dude seriously before coming to this novel I was reading one of favourite novel and gave power stones there but if I have more I would have definitely given here. FROM TOMORROW ALL MY POWER STONES ARE WITH YOU
I am looking forward to GD's new novel. The author is one of the best authors I know, so readers you won't be disappointed when it comes to writing style and grammar.
I look forward to the partnership between Leo and Morgana. Not sure if I should wish for Morgana's success but definitely look forward to how Leo gets himself out of death.
Totally worth reading it ...... I absolutely loved it .. just damnnnnn goooodddddddd
There are very few novels that can make me say this but this novel is absolutely one of them. It is a MASTERPIECE. That's it, that is all I have to say. Actually this is the novel that compelled me to write up a the story for my novel.
10/10 - 100% of the time. No doubt about it.
I tried my hardest to keep on reading this story, but I just can't continue. All the author does it make comments about what happen to him at the website he release his story originally and not the story.
I have left a few comments on some of the chapters, they weren't rude or over the top, just some thought on it. The author responded, instead giving a normal response to my comment, he told me to stop reading it, he was very defensive. I can understand from his story and comments response, he did not have a great time where he first release his story. People over their was beyond rude and would make anyone very upset, but my comments where nothing like that.
Author if you spent more time on writing your story, ignored really hateful people, your stories would be better, but you seem that you like to bathe in those comments and never let it go. I hope in the future you can get past your experience before you came to Webnovel and be able to write great stories.
I really like this book. Well... the plot is very intriguing and the main character is just so very interesting, tho a little bit enigmatic at the beginning. However, the storyline seems nice! Can't wait to see what's going to happen!!!
Good book.