cliche, really full of cliches. You have money yet you still live in a small bedroom, still ride a delivery bike, and still wear delivery uniform even though you bought new clothes
I adored your story, you have a different approach and I think that is why I keep reading it.
You have a great storyline and in my opinion, you must pay attention a little more to the details, but as far I can tell this is an amazing novel, can't wait to see how it's ending.
It is a novel is really funny and it shows many signs of creativity.
I hope it continues to be as good in the future.
It has the best first chapter I have read in a long time. Read it, you will know if you are going to like the novel only with the first chapter.
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Honestly mc is extremely one dimensional , he literally ate Zhang wuji cuz he wanted his luck and didn't like his plot that would happen further on which is insane , second he kills people for no reason cuz he be simping for girls and they just started talking about a girl he met for day and he decided to kill them which is mad
This book is great, the author has made a succesful system genre, with a beutiful world building.
I love the characters of this book, especially joby!
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fun novel with great attention to detail! the characters are lively and create a fun live environment not found everywhere I recommend everyone give this book a try!
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Enjoyable read, seems like a tower climbing at first but so far doesn't seem like the case. After reading the first 3 arcs, I felt the story so far was a prologue. A large chunk was dedicated to the trial/entry to the tower per se. The overall story felt like it progressed slowly overall but the pace and action within the trial made it seem fast paced.
The fighting scenes were well done and didn't feel repetitive. I liked how the MC was not always the strongest nor smartest one within the group. Other members are capable of making their own actions and pulling their own weight helping each other. Not being always dependent on the MC is rare. Though the 3rd arc MC took the reins.
The characters are nice and they have their own quirks. They mesh well together. Though you still have some of your stereotypical characters.
Some thing I disliked is that it felt repetitive that someone is knocked unconscious or captured and needed someone to save them. Characters got separated a lot in the trial so there was a lot of pov changes not bad at all. Additionally, there are a lot of named characters most might not get enough development. Lastly, a lack of deaths. There was always danger lurking around but nobody ever dies.
hey every chinese novels contain faceslapping incidents, it shows that they didn't even believe their own fellow citizens and foreigners in the Chinese novels will have rational thinking.they are showing that their own country people are brainless idiots???.atleast other country citizens believe their own fellows somewhat, but in china according to their own novels I think nobody has rational thinking. brainless monkeys???. I am not saying these ,their own people are writing like this.DON'T PUT FACESLAPPING.DISGUSTING