First off I want to give a disclaimer and say that I have only read up to chapter 679. Ok so getting into the story was pretty easy for me. I enjoyed the first 300ish chapters with only minor complaints that were really just me nit picking.However, the more I got into the story the more the story became a chore for me to read. I feel like the author had amnesia when writing this story because the details the author includes are completely forgotten about only a couple of chapters later. what makes this especially frustrating is that these details are key for Lin li to progress. For example he gets a crossbow with his second piece of debris. You would think that the crossbow might play a key role in the story since, I don’t know, maybe rhe most powerful weapon the stars of fury is a crossbow. But the author never mentions it ever again. Another example is his new servant he gets Norfellr. When he first meets him hes a “pure blooded vampire” that means hes at least 18+. This has been established already and there are many examples of this being true in the story. This vampire is actually able to deal the a magical beast that level 17 with his bare hands. YET only a couple chapters later the author seemingly forgets this due to convience sake and converts him into a level 17 vampire that is pretty useless all things considered. The author changes the story without considering the readers perspective and it is absolutely infuriating. There are so many examples of him forgetting plot points he could write another 1000 chapters if he ever followed up on any of them.The main character himself could use some work as well. For a character who has mastery at the very least in literally every profession, he hardly ever uses his skills to actually improve himself. Instead lf doing what the book title suggests and crafts to power himself up, he resorts to dungeon raiding. Why? Because hes lazy. This book was ok but its one of those that you read when you get bored and Are waiting for other books to update new chapters.
Everything is great about this book, However the MC is on the extreme end of the spectrum. He got a system that turns him into a vampire, he researches about vampires, he then acts as if the system is just him hallucinating. The MC is sooo stupid your brain cells will kamikaze each other just from reading his thought process and actions. Since this story is in a futuristic setting, I hope MC finds something to cure his extreme brain cell seppuku soon. Of course this is only my review for the first 20ish chapters, if my brain cells survive to the point where MC has the IQ higher than a retarded squirrel I will update. TLDR Character -9999/10
Please, can you translate this work again ? I would be grateful. The story is quite different from what I thought it would be. Surely the rhytm is quite slow and there are a lot of descriptions, but I would love to know, in the end, who really is our MC ;)
Love the sequel story but I'm worried about the lack of updates. As for the story itself, I'm glad we're finally seeing character development from the MC, I think the author even pokes fun at himself in a scene where the MC acknowledges his lack of emotional growth
Pretty good so far.