Undeads are walking

When it comes to zombie it makes me really interested about LOL! I love the first part! This story has potential to have a lot more reads and interest with a little more exposure. This story has good characters and as well a good Author! Kudos!

Zombies are a classic. It's always an opening to read about people's fortitude and courage. The story has a sharp and clear beginning, good characters. Great dynamics in a classic theme.

Don't worry about the grammar. You can hire an editor for that. A proofreader can also do the job of finding plot holes for you. Now, zombie apocalypse novels are a tough genre. You need to research all weapons be it melee or firearms, etc. You also need to be realistic as it was a modern survival thing. I can see that the story is going good so far and it has potential. The direction of the story is also superb! Good thing is, the characters are lifelike. I hope you improve your craft shortly. Will wait for that time to come

The way the author described the backstory of 3 guys, I really got into it. Zombie novels are always a plus and this one is living up to the mark. Way to go author... waiting for new chaps

I really am a sucker when reading zombie apocalypse! This novel kinda reminds me of left four dead, so I expect a lot of great things here in the novel and its succeeding chapters. However, there are some points I'd like to discuss.

You need to establish the virus and its background. How it was created. Who created it. When did it started. Although you could start with the apocalypse right off the bat, someone must explain what happened and what are zombies. Zombies are undead creatures that we all know and love, but you still need to explain what are those walking corpses and add something out of it.
Grammars and such can be learn so I'll leave that part out of the way. Kudos for the author!

horror is like a drug to me and I think this book has the potential of gaining lots of reAders interest . bravo. The story development is amazing and I absolutely find the zombie involve to be epic.