I enjoyed hope it atually gets updated rather than it being forgotten.
Wow, I am really amazed to read a story like this. At first, I thought this was an ordinary romance, but this story is indeed profound. Loved the book. Good work author
The premise of the story is very interesting!
I’m loving the main character so far. There aren’t many chapters but the author has a creative way in stringing the world together.
The author has a great usage of vocabulary and isn’t too repetitive. They’re grammar is also better than most writers on webnovel as well. Although the average grammar on webnovel is already bad to begin with so it probably isn’t saying much. Your grammar is good, but not great. Your good use of vocabulary helps immensely and didn’t tire me out which is a plus.
My biggest issue is the long sentences. Areas where you could hv put a fullstop, is immediately continued with a another sentence. A whole paragraph could be one long sentence. I could hardly remember what I just read.
It’s better to cut down some sentences short. Long sentences are not always better. Sometimes short sentences give more impact.
Also, the average reader can only remember up to 6-7 words, 10 at most. And as you get better, it increases. However, the average reader on webnovel aren’t even native english, let alone very focused.
So putting fullstops when needed should be taken into account.
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Well, Its kinda well written, but gender bender always freeking bothering me. I guess if there are no such thing, such as gender bender there will be many more readers will like or have interest on this novel, because many will hesitate for this genre, i dont know if he/she will turn a gay. Why dont you just make it girl or pure man, it will be a really good story, and the background of the is amazing, even til now im thinking of not to go on to the upper chapters, i just.like to when you create or make next time please make it friendly for all, because it is really annoying, i know for you i guess, its just a small issue/thing. But we cant admire a gay/or a guy dressing a girl clothes. Its making our brain hurt. Hahahah tnx btw. The story has good background, plot, and even my fav genre the gaming. But gender bender strike a good deal of stress to a reader like me. I think were quite many hahahaha anyway thanks, ill try to read for a few chap.
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the story is quite amazing , indeed the character are funny ,amazing novel . waiting for the next update now. please updated soon.
the author has done amazing work.
im so into this novel now.
This is a must-read novel if you into sword, magic, fantasy, and demi-human with no system. The author did a great job with descriptive world-building, characters have a personality, and the plot is on point with great logic. This novel has the potential to be a harem since it introduces a lot of waifu so far. Overall this novel is a hidden gem and very enjoyable to read!
Liking the story so far. The author described the realms well and was very vivid in narrating the scenes. Though I am not into fantasy novels, this got me interested.
My only comment so far is the lack of the use of punctuations, particularly a period. Still, it did not affect how the story was told so it's not a big deal.
To many fake 5 star reviews for another harem garbage story.Waste of time.
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I honestly feel that I've found the promised land of novels with this one. I absolutely love the premise and execution in it. My only wish is that it gets more attention and chapters.
I really loved your story, For readers, I will say pick up the story it sure is fun. There is ample good character design of MC and the story development is cool. What else can I say other than its addictive!! you will love the story of Ghost & Gaya. GIVE IT A READ. Good Job Author!!!