I have only read 31 chapters right now.Writing quality is a 4 for meUpdate stability a 5 for one chap per dayFor me, the synopsis does help with future events but the problem here is that the synopsis spoils too much of what happens. The author could just say she and not mention who those people are. Why? Because there are characters that fit the description of the lady and they are not even a player. Just from the 31 chapters I read, some groups fit the description of the betrayal (the black wings who torture him)and if the synopsis was vague on what group is going to betray him then it can create suspense. 5 for how the story is developing but 1 for the synopsis. And for me the synopsis affects the story development so it is a 3 star for Story Development.I like the characters except for the black wings for me they are annoying. I don't get why there are people who hate the mc at the start(tbh the guy who rated this story 5 stars was the one whi complained) since it is reasonable he acts that way. Although he was, personally for me, too slow. So 3 starsI like how they don't give too much of the background at the start(looks at stuck as a dungeon mob who dedicated the entire 3rd chapter for world-building in the perspective of a guy who dies in chapter 5). For me 5 stars
I can recommend it for everyone that is looking for a nice cultivation novel!So far (ch46) the story is quite interesting and the mc is manipulating the events to his benefits. I can see that the author makes him act smart, and he won't go crazy and take advantage of every single situation, just the tactical more important ones. There is, in a way, a second mc in this story. He is the actual mc, and also the competitor of OUR mc. Some 10000-year-old grandpa who is reincarnated, and now he is kissing little ****y girls. No, seriously. That dude is extremely strong with his experience and so on. Yet, our mc has knowledge as well and manages to fool that guy pretty good so far.The story is still fresh, but I can see that it is developing nicely. There is also a system, which is a bit op but not broken etc. It required the mc to be active and work hard to work properly. It has some quite interesting features, too. Anyway, grammar etc. is good enough. Waaaaaay better than the translations from the Chinese works.All in all, READ IT!... and enjoy your day.
This is so good! I love the characters and the plot! They're so creative and some parts are incredibly humorous too!! This is a verified must-read
隐婚甜宠：大财阀的小娇妻chapter-2844complete In the past life, Gu Weiwei was dug out of the heart by the man he loved and transplanted it to her most trusted girlfriend. Once reborn, he became the little girlfriend of Fu Hanzheng, China's first chaebol. She was careful step by step to avenge her who had insulted her. He blessed him everywhere and spoiled her to the extreme. It is said that Fu Hanzheng has no human nature. Was it the perfect husband who made her blush and heartbeat that day, and spoiled her lawlessness? Was it a fake husband? "Sir, a lot of school boys. In the chase wife" "All the boys school drop-out, I turned into a girls' school." "Sir, Mrs. circle and popular actor rumored, fry the CP." "Put the actor blocked ! " " That's your brother. " " ... then die. "