What is Reality ?

Well. First things first, the grammar could use some work. It is readable, although I can't deny that it hurts my eyes and this is coming from a brasilian writer who also struggles with english grammar! The main plot also seems to be initially just your everyday typical VR novel although it quickly switched to the stereotype reincarnation with a system. The MC just seems to be one of those dumbasses and probably he is gonna end up just like those clichê protagonists. For the good points, although the grammar is pretty bad I can't say it's the worst I've ever seen since I saw things that could make anyone feel the desire to drink bleach and put clorox on their eyes, so congrats because your novel is nowhere near close those garbages. Despite this story being quite my cup of tea I can say this author has a lot of potential for future growth so I'm looking forward to your future stories. Everyone needs to start somewhere, even the first chapters of my first novel are also pretty bad.
Sorry for being harsh on the review but I decided to be honest here, it is going to surely help you in the future.

It's a good start,keep moving forward and pay attention to any corrections given on the way.Wish you all the best,you have a potential.The story is a nice one

superb novel i also read this novel  the character are so funny . waiting for next update and update continue as possible . i like this novel

the story is  quite amazing , indeed the character are funny ,amazing novel . waiting for the next update now. please updated soon.
the author has done amazing work.
im so into this novel now.

Amazing work. I really like the characters they are so funny and amazing.
I like te story . Its so interesting with every chapter.
The author is doing a great job. There are few mistakes but still the story is so amazing.
In love with this novel

wow...I'm really liking this book ... Its my first time here and i'm glad i choose this book ... keep up with this amazing work.. im waiting for the updates .