Super neat concept, unique characters, and vivid descriptions without going too crazy with it and making it a slog.Thanks for the book!
My own work so 5 ⭐!! ...read 30 chaps then you'll guarantee get hook ?....30 CHAPS MUST TO READ..... I'll do Q|A here too
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Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
I hate his character. Like he is able to become op but nooooo, and than he is being a pussy fanboy so much that I can't take it and he trying to be a king what a joke. and really helping the main cast which is risking his own life just for your tv/novel character when you don't even know them personally, I just can't take it.
Fantastic Noveldon't buy into the negative comments all of them haven't read enough to judge itKeep up the great work Author
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ok I used to dislike MCs who were too submissive but for some reason the reasoning he gives behind his actions is something that I as a reader realised after reading tons of novels....good work no arrogant mc but one with a brain...my wronged heart is at peace from the overused cliches in other books... especially...M T L Chinese novels...plz update soon..
I still hope u complete your last novel "greed" but this is a great concept nevertheless I hope to see some great stuff from this :DKeep the good stuff up :3
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It started fine but the MC suddenly started having a hard time fighting some mobs in his school even after defeating a whole team of the best student in one of the top ten schools. The author completely disregarded that fact just to show that not all the mc does is win which is not good at all
it's good but could be better, you should let us get attached to some characters, like the mc.buy others than that you are doing pretty good.