Tail grunts, "You tell me what they are." She points at the door. "There are two of them, and it looks to me like they feed off each other to grow bigger."
" Now everyone out. Out. " Everyone took this as their signal to leave. As everyone left, Don and Elijah sprinted to the infirmary. The others quickly followed behind as they saw this.
I examine my arm, her fangs left behind a puncture wound on my forearm.
The entire hall erupted into frightened muttering that was only stopped by Zither's clear and musical voice.
HES BACK! YAY!
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Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't likeMc transmigrates☑️finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️Struggles but fails ☑️gets a panel golden finger ☑️ergo the training montage ☑️gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kindsuper polite and amiableI mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
So far the novel is good for meI just hope it doesn't dropPlease continue author-san ?It would also be great if you could increase the number of words in one chapterOr maybe publish two chapters in one day, so your novel will spread faster
Pretty meh overall. Overused tropes, needlessly dramatic descriptions and character reactions, characters’ whose personality exist solely as plot devices.Also, when the free chapters end the chapters are like 16 coins each? Rather expensive for the same amount of words other authors are pumping out.You could find worse, but also much better.
Amazing novel and Great grammar,But slow updating.?
The plot has been finally revealed.Please let me know in the comments if you did enjoy the plot twistI am open to all opinions, and criticism!
This one's a W, please don't drop there aren't many novels like this......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................