Wormhole Odyssey in the Wastel

Turn off your brain for this one as anyone with a sliver of medical/legal knowledge would know that the MC wouldn't be able to pull off as much as he does in the medical practice as a medical newbie. The MC isn't memorable as he is the typical arrogant facesmacking MC with the world bending over to give him circumstances to show off to others as he has little to no personality to speak of. I'd recommend this novel printed so it can serve as a good campfire since it isn't enjoyable at all to anyone with a brain.

Urban story, president of a gaming company. Pays homage to "Losing Money to be a Tycoon" by naming the MC as a department head of Tengda in his previous life. Surprisingly decent, and reasonably funny. Give this one a try before making judgements.

I want to be very clear I really enjoy reading the story I just think it could be better I'm not a writer so I don't know how it could be better or any suggestions on what you could do but keep up the great work.

I give this 5 stars I usually didn't care about mistakes or grammar error. Once I enjoy reading story it excites me the most. Let's back to the story, traveling time, is like a dream come true if you have something you want to change. You can do it just a snap of your fingers. Even if you make a multiple mistakes you can repeat it again and again and change it until it was perfect. I'm excited to know more about your story keep up the good work author!

Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.

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