DarkShadow4384
Hey man, let me know once you update this book. I can't wait for the next update.
chapter one is real good. And the cliffhanger at the end of the chp. You can already fell that the ex team mates are gonna come back to beg him back. Like those amines whereby the weakest leave the group and comes back overpowered. Real good man!
Story is good. No overpowered characters. Searched this yokai tag and got interested because of the title, gave it a chance to read and it was worth it.
Hello all my readers thank you for supporting my novel.
I know i am different, but this is my world , I can write whatever i want.
you don't like what i write. It doesn't mean you can judge my book.
we are all human with same equality ,I write just to express what i like that's all.
I'm sorry if someone get offended with my book.
and it's not good to bully someone in the platform.
Have a nice day you all. and thank you for your support.
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L'amore e l'inganno sono perfetti e anche se l'autore ha un'ampia comprensione dell'italiano, ci sono alcuni confusi con la fantasia. Ma la storia è molto bella. Buon lavoro
Overall, good job!
Don't know why there is few reviews here but this story is actually pretty good the character design 4 but Im pretty sure he will improve more the the World background is 5 the story development is also 5 so this story in my opinion is a solid gold...
choose this story guys, I have followed this story through raws and it only gets better
the Nationalism in this story is fair enough, plus kinda legitimate
And final point, it's easily the best in this trial read
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I really like this story so far. It’s interesting and it has a good flow, as well as good pacing. I just hope he doesn’t drop it. You should check this story out.
Bois this is gold. Tired of your typical copy paste system/cultivation/evolution/whatever non original novels? Well this one is a treat for you, slow story based on emotional and psychological state of MC and his origin with deep focus on love and its profound imporance. This one is a keeper bois
This story is AMAZING!. I just wish it would update more often since I'm running out of novels like this. Nice background and mc and the other people arent idiot's or super dense, but they think about their actions. Just curious if Lily is Ashley's love interest.
Listen I like this type of novel and all, but even the characters' first blueprint was the same... it's just another copy of a popular web novel. listen if you're an author it shouldn't be too hard to just take ideas from the book, but just don't copy it.
